OG NO.29 作文

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Q:Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?



   There will often spring up a heated discussion as to human activity. Among the various think that the earth is being harmed by human activity, a sizeable percentage of the people hold the idea that human activity make the earth a better place to live.

 It’s no doubt that people had ever damaged the earth. The Globe Warming, El Nino phenomenon and Greenhouse effect are caused by human activity, which a huge number of forest have been cut down, CO2 have been discharged by factories, buses and air-conditions all over the world. Sea-level are increased every year. Water and soil erosion are serious. The contamination in the sea or river came from the factories or traffic accidents.

  However, with the development of environment, more and more people aware the significance of protecting the earth. As far as I concern, I have a preference that human activity make the earth a better place to live. United Nations Climate Change Conference had been hold in Copenhagen
on Dec.7.2009. It means that many countries cooperated with each other to solve the contamination all over the world. All of us want to make the earth a better place to live.


I would here explain a few of the most crucial points. Increasingly human activities are benefit to the earth. For instance, in China
, people save on water and electricity, forest has advance with exceptional speed, the government begin conserving the forests and woodlands. The new technology reduced CO2 during the process of manufacture. We do out bit towards protecting the environment. Not only do the human activity make the earth a better place to live, but also protect the environment. The sustainable development is one of the most important human activities which defend the pollution in the world. It can make sure that our future generations can live with health and peace in the earth.


Although the earth had ever been harmed by human activity, the human activity will make the earth better from now on. Since people have a common dream all around the world that is human can get on well with nature forever and ever.    

   

canadoctor

my opinions show in two ways.first, you advocate the latter idea,but you do not give the supportive proofs on the topic.you should provide the details and examples to illustrate how the mankind make the earth better to live.For example, the conditions in dwelling is improving:people can live in the beautiful apartments and houses.especially in winter, people never worry about the low tempreture.modern transportation technology makes the mankind very convenient to go to work and travel. the protection of enviroment can be part of your evidence.Secondly, pay attention to your spelling and grammar.one or two mistakes can be accepted but more erros in the basic languange use may make you lose the chance to get high scores.