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发表于 2009-9-12 23:23:00 | 只看该作者

帮我看一下,打打分,评价一下,谢谢~~

Parents are our best teachers .

 

When a baby comes to this world, the first man they live with is his/her parents. They teach him how to walk, how to eat, provide their loves and encouragement to the child without hesitate. It is the parents who company us the whole life and always stands behind us, as well as educates us most.

 

We almost spend the whole childhood with our parents. Before we can remember, it is parents who teach how to cry, how to laugh, how to speak, as well as how to walk. They teach us the skills to survive.

 

A bit later, when we can say “mama” and “papa”, we watch the way they do, listen to the way they say. In certain degrees, it is the first lessons for us to learn. So we just follow their suits when we grow up. That is to say, as parents, they set the examples for their children in the strategy to solve problems, affect them the attitudes toward the difficulties, as well as the way to think. The parents provide the environment for their children to grow up, if this environment is warm and happy, obviously, a kind and generous child is the inevitable result.

 

Image that when you are in trouble, who will be the person you will ask for? The answer is absolutely the parents. Yes, our parents are our closest friends in our lifetime. They are the only persons who will open their aims, embrace us and encourage us when we are in deep. What is the more important is that they will advice us how to deal with this hard situation to avoid the similar one happening again. They will tell us their own experience, give you suggestions, to go through all terrible things with us.

 

To sum up, the children’s behavior, in certain degrees, is the reflection of that of their parents, who are the best teachers for all of the children in the world.

沙发
发表于 2009-10-11 15:59:00 | 只看该作者
 without hesitate?应该是hesitance吧
板凳
发表于 2009-10-15 22:26:00 | 只看该作者

楼主这篇文章很怪,第一次看到观点后置的文章,而且前面说了一大堆不知道你最终目的要说啥:是要借其引出观点还是就自己的观点展开论述,要是想作为论据却没有论点,也没有论述论据和论点的关系。看完文章让人摸不着头脑。

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