6月AWA题目分析

nearmiss

一个国家mational park become less attractive duo to pollution. 在这些park里发现mine deposit. mining factories 可以开采这些资源，不但可以增加税收还可以提供工作。说这是最好的可以make the economy thrive的方法。

这篇求教NN，哪里有问题？

nearmiss

The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company's managers:

“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”

Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.

求NN分析，写不来，马上就要考了，心里很慌