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发表于 2009-3-9 20:46:00 | 只看该作者

TWE111 need help,thanks

111. Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

    Some people hold the opinion that they enjoy spend time with one or two close friends. Others,however,choose to spend time with a large number of friends.Personally,I would prefer the latter one because I think spending time with more friends has more advantages.

    There are numerous reasons why I as fond of going out with many friends,and I would in here explain a few of the most important ones.The main reason is that there are many activities needing many participators It can be given a concrete example of holding a party. A party really need many people with different acqierement joining in.Some can sing pieces of beautiful songs,some can dance crazily,others can tell some funny stories.All of them contribute to the excellent party where we all will enjoy ourselves.

    Another reason why I advocate the attitude of this is that I get opportunities to keep in touch with more old friends.Now I have much pressure on study,so I cannot have a great deal of time to accompany friends.taking an activity with many friends gives a means to meet more old friends.A friend means a way to solve a problem you meet.More friends kept in touch with,more ways to solve a problem you get.

    Of course,choosing spending with one or two close friends also has advantages to some extent.If you want to have an activity needing only a few people like playing cheese or seeing a movie,it will be better.

    But of all these factors are contemplated,the advantages of spending time with large number of friends carry more weight than those of spending time with a few friends.From what has been discussed above ,we may finally reach the conclusion that it is better for me to be with many friends in leisure time.

沙发
发表于 2009-3-10 21:19:00 | 只看该作者
建议楼主多举些例子,具体的,比如“那次我考试成绩不好,和同学小鸣一起谈心之后心情就变好了”之类的。老美们很喜欢那些有具体人名、细节的例子。

我写作文就一直多用具体例子,所以得分也一直还不错,29分……
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-10 21:38:00 | 只看该作者
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