prep sc1 186 and 190

celiachen

以下是引用sjjay在2009-2-2 0:56:00的发言：

E选项but后为a population of only 4 million people,many of whom...此处为并列句的省略结构，全句可以看成Laos has a land  area comparable to that of Great Britain but (laos has) a population of only 4 million people, many of whom are members of hill tribes ensconced in the virtually inaccessible mountain valleys of the north.E选项省略了相同的主语和谓语。这里只有E选项能将省略后的内容还原，其他选项不能还原。 many of whom 同样做非限定从修饰people.（比较的逻辑性我没有提，大家都讲得差不多了），这是我关于but后面句子的一点看法，请指点。

解释得真好，谢谢你sjjay

sjjay

celia MM真客气~我只是提出自己的看法罢了。

aeoluseros

当some...,while others各自连接的分句都没有谓语时，中间的while可省.

snowlemon

我对186的d选项的错误还是不清楚啊
如果size和area是可以比的，那是后面的", but"错了？
如果这里的but都是连词，只是省略了主谓，(laos has) only 4 million in population 也是对的吧？
这个“D选项同A选项。“不太明白哦！
请教nn

snowlemon

ding

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balabaladou7

句子结构为

laos has a land area comparable to that of Great Britain but a population of only 4 million people, many of whom...

 

A. but 连接前后无对等部分：整句或相应成分。Where无指代。

B. has 和 there is 不对等。Only的位置错，改变原意。Many的出现使句子变成三个分句，意思改变。改变主句的平衡。Many of them 修饰a population of only 4 million
        ，用法idiomatic.

C. but连接的两部分不平衡，前面是句子，has…;  后面是短语，with…;   Many of them 修饰a population of only 4 million
        ，没有建立前后的修饰关系，也没有连词，使得句子run on.

D. but连接的两部分不平衡, 前面是has+n，后面是4 million in population，造成segment.

E. 正确。but正确连接了两个名词结构，造成平行，many of whom，修饰4 million people，非限定性定语从句避免run-on。

请指正。

lk2356

190.
            (26333-!-item-!-188;#058&001956)

 

The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.

A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter

E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter

想再求证一下，关于同志们说的E的with多余问题。

如果没有with，即按A的结构来说，句子的主语是什么呢？

The thirteen original British colonies in North America，和后面的some.. others是什么关系？同位语的关系么？

另外each had是独立主格么？

脑子比较混，忘牛牛赐教！

瞳ヒトミ

以下是引用lk2356在2009-4-6 13:08:00的发言：

另外each had是独立主格么？

我觉得each是做主语的同位语

但是我还是搞不太清楚E的with到底是什么成份什么？
如果是 with some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter 这样的话，也就是把E的while去掉，这句话还对吗？高手解决一下嘛~~~

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瞳ヒトミ

以下是引用celiachen在2009-2-2 11:08:00的发言：

agree：

现在再看190E，就觉得while是错得最刺眼的。

关于while做“比较”时省略的用法

while引导省略式状语从句的条件：a从句主语与主句主语相一致；b从句是系表结构。同时满足以上两个条件之后，省去从句中的主语和系动词

69. Although she had signed a pledge of abstinence while being an adolescent. Frances Willard was 35 years old before she chose to become a temperance activist.

(A)  while being an adolescent

(B)   while in adolescence

(C)  at the time of her being adolescent

(D)  as being in adolescence

(E)   as an adolescent

为什么这里的B不对，新东方上课的时候老师讲，while后面一定要跟句子，但是我觉得Celiachen说的才是对的。可是根据while可以省略的方式，那么这题B也是可以的，但是答案是E

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2009mba

190.
   (26333-!-item-!-188;#058&001956)

The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.

A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter

        SOME..., OTHERS --- 是独立主格？ 因为formed 可以作为过去分词作修饰

        主句是 each had？  （each 在这里不是独立主格）each 的独立主格形式= each+名词+名词/形容词/分词/介系词

 

      这题实在是晕菜了。请高手求证！

E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter

    

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