AWA9月新题，诚征写作思路

denverxu

AAN1.说因为demand 减少，stock price 降低，Blastcom Corporation 原来的mining technology面临困境。所以Blastcom定了一个新策略：directed scientists of our staff to switch to renewable energy technology. Because the renewable energy industry is booming and several prominent renewable energy companies （举了三个）have been successful in recent years. 因为以上所说，Blastcom Corporation 会在未来比较安全。

AAN2. Last year When several auto companies the replaced some of its permanent expensive full-time employees with cheaper part-time employee, their profits increased. a software design company plan to copy the same strategy, by cutting full-time to less than half. THus it will surely see profit increase and long-term stability.

AAN3. 引自W Newsmagazine 给董事的report: 大概是说watch newsmagazine有员工retraining和员工流失的问题。Wyman新加入了W Newsmagazine的Board of Directors, 他曾经在一家leading publisher of children's books工作，利用电脑技术并让员工以 group projects方式工作给那家儿童刊物出版社带来了创新。Wyman的加入会解决Watchman的员工流失问题。 AIN1. best teachers are those who encourage and expect students to challenge the popular ideas   AIN2. some one concerns that we depend too much on computers, but computer are continually improving our lives

白金龙

AAN1:

1,hasty generalization in assuming that the companies ,which have been successful in recently years, will automaitically result in the succeed of B Co.

2,gratuitous assumption that the company can escape from the situation by switching to renewable energy technology.

3, all things are equal . no evidence to support the claim that the conditions would remian the same in the ruture

AAN2:

1,false analogy in assuming that the straties from auto Co. are applicable in the software Co.

2,all things are equal. no evidence to show that the condition will remian the same as before

3,causal oversimplication. the line of the reasoning is that because the replacement occurred before the increase of profits, the replacement should be responsible for the increase 

ANN3:

1,not the technology may be some other factors ,such as the culture of the company,the compensation of the company ...

2,false analogy ,  the straties of publisher of children's books will applicable in  

3,all things are equal, conditions are not the same as before

AIN1:

1, first of all, the teachers would be better because of they encourage and expect...

2,however, the encouragement of ...is not the most important factor of the best teacher

3, cask theory, best teachers are those who can find "the lowest wood plate" of the children

AIN2,

本来觉得DEPENDS比较好写,后来觉得,不如站在一个观点上支持,CASE BY CASE

computer are continually improving our lives

1,make working convenience and efficient,net based conference

2,make daily lives more comfortable,

3,make study more efficient 

denverxu

多谢