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Topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement

      Technology has made the world a better place to live.

      Use specific reason and examples to support your opinion

 

 

 

 

 

Nowdays,with the development of the technology,it is universally acknowledged that our living standard has been promoted by the advanced technics.Yet is that the real case？Differenr people have different ideas due to the diferent angles.Some insist that they indeedly benefit from the developing technics,while others hold the suspectable opinion.In my personal viewp- -oint,however,it is not compeletly true to say that the technolog bring us a new better life.

 

First and foremost,the advancment in technology,especially in the informatinon domain,dispose individuals into a unsecure field.For example,there are more and more computer-hackers appearing in the society,who have disturbed the people’s normal life.They are eager to,with the help of internet,get the personal information from bank or other authorities record system by illegal methods,spreading them on the net that everyone can read.What’s worse,some hackers use the deficits of  bank computer system to steal deposit easily from others’ account.These behaviors have made a serious effect in the community,which evoke the public’s fierce denouncment

 

Addionally,the traffic congestion is another noticable problem which is attributtd to the technology.Many big cities in the world all have to confront the heavier road condition due to the explosion of private automobile consuming.Already ,the manufactures have mastered a mature process of production which lower the cost but raise the productivity.Thus people can afford a car at a lower price than before,causing the road over-crowed.It is another reason can support my idea.

 

Last but not least ,the highly developed technics lead us to a faster living-pace.Modern people ,who are always under a time-pressed condition, have to keep up the pace by forcing themselves.Then pressure appears simultaneously.A reserch from www.sina.com reveals that 80% modern people face a high-pressure life that makes them exhausted.No one can deny the truth behind the number.

 

All in all, based on what I mentioned above.Although the technology change our life and make it a better place than before,not all aspects have the efficient efforts.In the other words,the technology will make the world a better palce to live untll it is applied properly.Oherwise it might bring us some negtive effect.     

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