本来觉得都已经明白的了,结果今天看og,发现og紫皮第五题上的解释是:
5. A Labor Department study states that the numbers of women employed outside the home grew more than a thirty-five percent increase in the past decade and accounted for more than sixty-two percent of the total growth in the civilian work force (A) numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase (B) numbers of women employed outside the home grew more than thirty-five percent (C) numbers of women employed outside the home were raised by more than thirty-five percent (D) number of women employed outside the home increased by more than thirty-five percent (E) number of women employed outside the home was raised by more than a thirty-five percent increase Diction +Rhetorical construction The sentence misuses the word numbers and contains the redundant word increase.The plural numbers means a large crowd or multitude,while the singular number refers to a specific quantity of individuals.The count of women here should be expressed as the number.The noun increase repeats the meaning already present in the verb grew;only one of the two words is necessary to the sentence. A Numbers should be number;grew and increase repeat the same idea. B Numbers should be the singular number. C Numbers should be number;the passive voice verb were raised by is unclear and wordy. D Correct.In this sentence,number correctly replaces numbers,and redundancy is eliminated with the use of the verb increased. E Passive voice verb were raised by is unclear and wordy;increase is redundant. The correct answer is D. 有谁知道到底是怎么回事呢?
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