Topic 185 请大家指正～

happyfish25

185 You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose
to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

If let me choose study alone or with a group of students, I will prefer the latter. Studying alone make me loss chance to communicate with others and make you stick to your own idea even it's a wrong. However, studying with a group of students helps me a lot.

 

The mean reason why I prefer study with a group is that I enjoy sharing idea with other people. It's interesting to see my classmate have a totally different opinion on an article from you or find a smarter way to solve a math program than me. It’s fine to share different view with others, and we can discuss and even debate for our own idea or theory. No matter who will win in the end, it can open my mind to make my thought more comprehensively and understanding more thoroughly.

 

Another reason is that I can get help whenever I am in trouble, and make the study more efficient. Also when I hold an incorrect idea, your friends can help to make it corrected. On the other hand, if I study alone, I have to turn to numerous reference books and spend a huge amount of time to just look for a hint. Even when something wrong happens, it’s hard for me to be aware of it figure it out by myself.

 

Last but not least, study with a group will make me have more friends and enjoy friendship. I can get more familiar with someone who I don’t know much about before. Also in the modern world, we are all busy with our own business, such as learning piano, painting, computer, etc., and we share less and less time to stay with our friend and maintain friendship. Study together with a group of student especially with some good friend will help me to donate more time to my friends and help to strength the relationship.

 

I really like study with my buddies, discussing, debating, and laughing. Can you image how a lovely picture it is?

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