MARKETING PHD的STUDY PLAN和归国计划~请大家提意见~~

davidsfo

一点小建议：

 Career Plan


After get the PhD degree in USA, I will come back to China to find position as

a faculty or even assistant professor in top 10 Chinese universities.

建议改成：

After getting the PhD degree in USA, I will  find a faculty position as
or even assistant professor in top 10 Chinese universities.

不用那么强调回中国，说出意思就好了

不然有点那样的感觉

虽然我觉得你不改也没什么，不过感觉改了更好