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发表于 2008-5-28 14:49:00 | 只看该作者

TWE003似乎写的人还不多,我来找拍

请大家多多指教!Bow~~~

When talk about the quality of life, food for eating is definitely one of the most important aspects. As the transportation of food is so fast due to the development of logistic, the tools for cooking is more and more various, and there are so many different kinds of method supplying faster food, it is much easier to prepare food than ever before, and, our life is enjoying this comfortable changes.

 

For one thing, the supply of food is much more convenient than before. As a result the choice of food is enlarged tremendously, which is good news for people’s taste. Thanks to the quick delivery of supermarket, the material could be easily got to prepare for a meal, especially when people want to make those they seldom see within the region where they live. For instance, green vegetables are hard to obtain at cold areas during winter, but nowadays it can be seen displayed on the marker there. People don’t have to travel a long distance to warm places or wait for a long time for the spring in order to have these green precious anymore, like what they usually do in the past. Instead, all people need to do now is to pick a basket, go to the market, and select any object they want to eat, and, people are likely to be more satisfied from eating now.

 

Another important thing is that, as what people used for cooking is developed, life would become much healthier and easier. Take the persons who live on a plateau as an example. The pressure there is so low that the food is not easy to be fully heated, and always eat semi-raw material like meat is harmful. But at the moment they have some special tools which could manage to increase the pressure inside, and then the food could be heated thoroughly. This method is critical for a healthy eating. Another great invention would be the microwave oven. It could help people to prepare the food in such a short minutes, which accordingly save time. Once a person does not want to waste too much time prepare for a meal, the microwave oven would be very helpful.

 

Last but not least, there is a huge amount of restaurants outside, provide not only delicious food but also nice service. So it is not merely a more comfortable way to prepared food for themselves, at the same time, people are enjoying the feeling of being served. Besides, there are so many restaurants mainly supplying fast food, people who order the food doesn’t even have to go there, which is much more easier for eating and consequently for our life.

 

In a word, the quick delivery of food, the sophisticated cooking tools, and the supply of restaurants make it easier for us to prepare for food, therefore, bring us a better life.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-5-28 14:52:00 | 只看该作者

补充一下题目:

Nowadays,food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

 

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-5 16:03:00 | 只看该作者

唉没人响应,魅力不够。先自我反省修改一遍。欢迎大伙再批评指正

 

Speaking of the quality of life, we could hardly ignore food as one of the most important aspects. Along with the ongoing development of logistics and transportation, the diversification of cooking tools and booming of food providers, it is much easier to prepare food than ever before, and, our life is enjoying these delightful changes.

 

For one thing, the supply of food is much more convenient than before. As a result the choice of food is enlarged tremendously, which is good news for people’s taste. Thanks to the quick delivery of supermarket, the material could be easily got to prepare for a meal, especially when people want to make those they seldom see within the region where they live. For instance, green vegetables are hard to obtain at cold areas during winter, but nowadays it can be seen displayed on the marker there. People don’t have to travel a long distance to warm places or wait for a long time for the spring in order to have these green precious anymore, like what they usually do in the past. Instead, all people need to do now is to pick a basket, go to the market, and select any object they want to eat, therefore people are likely to be more satisfied from eating now.

 

Another important thing is that, as what people used for cooking is developed, life would become much healthier and easier. Take the persons who live on a plateau as an example. The pressure there is so low that the food is not easy to be fully heated, and always eat semi-raw material like meat is harmful. But at the moment they have some special tools which could manage to increase the pressure inside, and then the food could be heated thoroughly. This method is critical for a healthy eating. Another great invention would be the microwave oven. It could help people to prepare the food in such a short minutes, which accordingly save their time. Once a person does not want to waste too much time prepare for a meal, the microwave oven would be very helpful.

 

Last but not least, there is a huge amount of restaurants outside, provide not only delicious food but also nice service. So it is not merely a more comfortable way to prepared food for themselves, at the same time, people are enjoying the feeling of being served. Besides, there are so many restaurants mainly supplying fast food, people who order the food doesn’t even have to go there. In that case they are able to save time and energy for other important plans.

 

Considering all the factors mentioned above, it is our luck to take the advantage of easier food preparing in our life. With the development of food industry and technology, it is expected that there is going to be more amazing changes, which would bring us a more convenient and comfortable life.

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