刚写的。17号就要考试了，麻烦大家指导一下，感谢

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Topic List No.16

Question: It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

  Apparently, during and after the construction of the new restaurant will devastate my living condition by providing sound and light pollution which influence me directly. Nevertheless, I’ll still support the coming new restaurant because the advantages are far outweigh the disadvantages.

  First of all, the new restaurant can help me in saving my time from cooking. It is always unwise and inconvenient for me to cook since I’m single. Also, I’m not proficient in cooking, so it  always took a lot of time for me to cook. After working all day, the only desire for me is to rest, and this restaurant will fulfill my dream, take me out from the dilemma of cooking or fast food. So this is a great news for me that a new restaurant is coming in my neighborhood, which means I don’t have to worry about my dinner anymore.

  First of all, the new restaurant can help me in saving my time from cooking. It is always unwise and inconvenient for me to cook since I’m single. Also, I’m not proficient in cooking, so it  always took a lot of time for me to cook. After working all day, the only desire for me is to rest, and this restaurant will fulfill my dream, take me out from the dilemma of cooking or fast food. So this is a great news for me that a new restaurant is coming in my neighborhood, which means I don’t have to worry about my dinner anymore.

  Second, the new restaurant will widen the variety of the foods I can eat since I had no choice but fast food if I don’t cook myself. Luckily, I can get rid of those fast foods which may harm my health if I eat it too frequently. I don’t have to eat burgers or pizzas anymore since that was my only choice before the new restaurant built, therefore the new restaurant might help me to reduce my weight.

  Second, the new restaurant will widen the variety of the foods I can eat since I had no choice but fast food if I don’t cook myself. Luckily, I can get rid of those fast foods which may harm my health if I eat it too frequently. I don’t have to eat burgers or pizzas anymore since that was my only choice before the new restaurant built, therefore the new restaurant might help me to reduce my weight.

  Finally, the crucial point is, having dinner in restaurant may help me to improve the relationship between me and my neighbors, since we had not talked for a long time because of my busy work, so here comes a chance for me to rebuild the relationship by having dinner with them, and also I will never eat alone. Moreover, having dinner outside is also a chance for me to meet new friends, therefore I will support this idea gladly.

  Finally, the crucial point is, having dinner in restaurant may help me to improve the relationship between me and my neighbors, since we had not talked for a long time because of my busy work, so here comes a chance for me to rebuild the relationship by having dinner with them, and also I will never eat alone. Moreover, having dinner outside is also a chance for me to meet new friends, therefore I will support this idea gladly.

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