贡献一篇申述信

caena

4月14日上海F1 MBA签过. 具体情况请进下面的链接

http://www.chasedream.com/show.aspx?id=3567&cid=69

由于不是一签,所以自己写了封申述信.不过没有机会给VO看就Pass了.由于目前申述信的样本不多(因为现在被拒的人少了),也为了不浪费自己的辛勤劳动,现在把它贡献给有过据签经历的CDer们,给你们的执着加油! 这篇东东只是个参考,并没有给任何人看过和修改过,欢迎大家讨论批评.

Dear Visa Officer,

 

I applied for F1 visa in the summer of 2001 for the purpose of continuing my undergraduate study in US, and was rejected of my application in both July and August. Though my situation completely changed now and I do not believe that the denial of visa seven years ago would have any direct influence to my application this time, there are still a few points that I would like to clarify here.

 

The aspiration of entrepreneurship was deeply rooted in my mind ever since I was in high school. The hidden entrepreneur in me has always been my only motivation to go to US, as well as the most important reason to pull me back to China. For me, the essence of entrepreneurship lies far beyond the fortune, power or status,
                instead it is an inspiring and everlasting process that I can really establish and change something.

 

Seven years ago, I hold exactly the same dream as I do now, but selected an unwise approach that does not fit my personality and interest. I grew up in a family in which both my grandfather and my father were experts in engineering field. Subtly influenced by them, I once wrongly believed that the new technology was the only determinant in initiating a successful new business. Definitely, the best place to acquire the most advanced high technology is US. Therefore, I had planned to continue my undergraduate study in US in order to become an expert in science & technology field, and returned to China to launch my high-tech company afterwards.

 

Though adamant and passionate as I have always been, I was a first-year college student with extremely limited exposure to the real business world. While my horizon broadened gradually, my passion for business overwhelmed my interest in science & engineering. I came to realize that I am a natural business leader and would never enjoy the sense of achievement in any other domain. The dynamic, challenging and exciting business environment is the just right world where I belong to.

 

In summary, my ultimate motivation of applying for F1 visa both seven years ago and now are clear, candid and consistent. I would like to take this opportunity to appreciate the visa officer’s efforts to terminate a worthless investment of time and money as well as a poor planning of my life seven years ago, but it is not reasonable to assume that I have ever had the intention of immigration to US.

 

Thanks for your time and patience to understand my situation subjectively and holistically.

 

Sincerely,

davidsfo

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