TOFEL作文评分标准

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TOFEL作文考试意在衡量考生对书面英语的历届、的组织和运用各种英语句型、的词汇来阐明自己的观点及理由的能力。www.test99.com
    

Test99 TOEFL作文的评分采取全面评判的形式，即重点考核总体的表达效果，而不过分用语法上的标准来细究结构、的拼写、的边点和词汇用法之类的错误。考生会因文章整体表达效果而得分。www.test99.com

Test99 一、的 六分标准：文章切题；阐述充分，即能展开讨论，论据或说明比较充分，文章具有说服力；段落组织有序，衔接紧密、的过度自 然，有很强的逻辑性；段落内句与句连接顺畅，句式使用恰当、的灵活、的成熟；用词准确、的得体。文章中可有个别语法和拼写错误，但不影响内容表达。通篇文章给人的印象是作者有较强的写作能力，在修辞、的句法、的词汇等方面的英语水平达到了一定的高度。www.test99.com

Test99 二、的 五分标准：文章切题；阐述基本充分，在某些细节上有缺陷；段落层次组织有序，衔接紧密、的过度自然、的逻辑性强；句子间联系顺畅，句式使用恰当、的灵活，有少量语法错误；用词基本得体，有少量用词不当和拼写错误。文章给人的总体印象是作者有较强的写作能力，英语水平不错，但与六分作文相比，文章的错误略多，作者的语言功底略欠缺。www.test99.com

Test99 三、的 四分标准：文章切题；阐述尚可，展开不够；段落组织有序，衔接紧密，有逻辑性；句子间连接基本顺畅，有部分语法错误；用词一般，有时不得体（如大词与小词随便使用，缺少文体意识），词性区分和拼写有若干错误。总体印象是文章框架结构与连贯较好，各方面的错误有一些，英语水平一般化。www.test99.com

Test99 四、的 三分标准：文章切题；段落组织基本合理，有逻辑性，但只存在于语义层次上，语言表层上未能体现；句子框架结构基本成立，但有许多语法错误，句间联系不顺畅，由于不善于使用逻辑连接词显得语言幼稚、的生硬；词汇方面拼写错误多，常有词不达意的现象。总体印象是英语水平不够、的写作能力较差，基本的词、的词法、的句法等功底有限，修辞与文体知识尚未入门，能勉强表达自己，但表达能力收到语言水平的限制。www.test99.com

Test99五、的 二分标准：文章切题；阐述没有展开，只是局限于三言两语地回答问题；没有段落组织，很乱，文章很短，只有一段；句子排列有一定的逻辑关系，能看出各句的基本框架，但结构或语法错误较多；用词不得体，拼写错误多。总的印象是英语水平低，写作能力差，尚未分清口语、的书面语言及各种文体间的界限。由于文章过短或过乱，问题没有展开讨论，造成语言和内容两方面都有严重的不足。 www.test99.com

Test99六、的 一分标准：文章在各方面都有严重错误，文章、的句式都不够清楚。总的印象是根本没有写作能力，英语水平太低，够不上二分标准，只能给最低分。 以上标准提醒我们:www.test99.com

Test99（1）作文要有一定的长度，以便将论点展开，把问题谈清楚。www.test99.com

Test99（2）文章应有若干段落，段之间应有很强的逻辑性，使文章连贯，呼应，有头有尾。www.test99.com

Test99（3）句与句之间衔接要紧密，不能胡乱堆积，给人一盘散沙的感觉。www.test99.com

下面给出按各评分标准的范文，仅供参考。www.test99.com

题目：Some intensive English programs in the United States offer a foreign student the option of living with an American family while he or she is studying abroad. Many students feel that such a home-stay program is a valuable part of their total learning experience. However, others may feel that such a plan offers little value. In a short essay, discuss one or two advantages of living with an American family and then state one or two disadvantages. Tell whether you are in favor of or opposed to the idea of home-stay. Give examples to support your opinion.www.test99.com

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A foreign student who plans to come to the United States must have some definite goals in mind. For the student who wants to improve his English quickly and learn about American customs firsthand, there is often an opportunity to live with an American family. There may be one or two disadvantages to this living arrangement; however, I believe that there are far more advantages.www.test99.com
First of all, some minor disadvantages to living with an American family include both a lack of privacy and little opportunity to have independence (be independent). For instance, the foreign student may find that the family expects him to join them in group activities such as watching television and going on picnics. At times, however, he might enjoy staying in his room to read or to write letters to his family and friends. Another drawback to living in an American home involves the possibility that the family may treat the student like a child. For example, the parents may want to decide who his friends will be and where he will go during his leisure time away from home.www.test99.com
Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to living with an American family, the advantages far outweigh them. By taking part in a home-stay program, the student has an excellent opportunity to learn about American customs. He will find out how to behave in different social situations such as parties and serimonies (ceremonies) and how to dress (dress on) these occasions. Also, he will learn about many other aspects of the American way of life, such as the way schools are run in the United States. With a family lose by, he can ask questions about attendance rules and school costs. The family will make certain that he becomes acquainted with this new way of life, and soon he will feel at home.www.test99.com
Another advantage to lining with an American family is that the student is in an ideal environment to improve his English. For example, each time he has a conversation with someone in the family, this native speaker can help him with his pronounciation (pronunciation) and grammer (grammar). Maybe the younger children in the family can help the student with his homework, too. But the most important thing is that he will be surround (surrounded) by English most of the time during his stay in the United States.www.test99.com
Although I agree that there may be a couple of disadvantages to living with an American family, I feel that the advantages are more obvious. In a home-stay program, the student can learn about American customs in the most natural way possible. In addition, he will find himself in an atmosphere in which his English will certainly improve. In my opinion, these are the two most important goals for him to consider, and living with an American family is the best way to achieve them.www.test99.com

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Every year, many foreign students go to America to study English. Some of this (them) will participate in a home-stay program and live with an American family. However, others will take (make) a different decision. They will live with friends from their own country. I believe that if a foreign student looks at both possibilities, he will decide to live with an american (American) family. Even though there are one or two drawbacks to the home-stay way (option), there are far more benefits.www.test99.com
In taking (making) his decision about how to live in the United States, the foreign student is smart (wise) to consider one or two disadvantages to living with an American family. First of all, he must realize that he is going to feel homesick at first. Living in an American home with people of other (another) language and culture may cause this feeling to increase. Also, the american family could become very protective of him. They may ask him where he is going when he leaves home and when he will return. Despite these two disadvantages, there is a stronger idea (argument) in favor of living with Americans.www.test99.com
By living in american (an American) home, the student has (has an) opportunity to become familiar with American customs and culture. For instance, he will learn how important the (the importance of ) family closeness is (closeness). He can see how the children communicate with their parents and how the parents educate their children. He will not feel like a stranger because the American family will help him adjusting (adjust) to a new life.www.test99.com
In an American home, he can learn English fast. Family members can help him with his homeworks (homework). When he speaks English, they can point (point out )his errors. In this way, he can learn English naturally.www.test99.com
Although there are some disadvantage (disadvantages) to living with an American family, there are heavier (greater) benefits. If the foreign student at first realizes the values of learning about a new culture and improving his English at the same time, he will definitely choose to experience a home-stay in the United States. With an American family, he will find studying there a very big (rewarding) experience.www.test99.com

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After a foreign student has decided to come to the United States to study English, he must think about where (where he) is going to live and with whom. I believe that he should live with (an) American family if he can becuase (because) they can give him the support (that) he needs. They can help him improve his English, too.www.test99.com
To begin with, the foreigner who inhabits (lives) with an American family can rely on them for suprot (support) as he adjusts to a complete (completely) new way of life. Suppose that (This is especially helpful if) he becomes homesick.www.test99.com
Another advantage to living with an American family is (that) the student can improve his English quick (quickly). He will met (meet) friends who came (come) to visit. he (He ) will force (be forced) to use English whether he wants to or not.www.test99.com
As far as disadvantages are concerned, I see only one (one he may be treated like a baby. The family (family will) want to protect him from danger (dangerous) situations.www.test99.com
I will conclude by saying that even is the student has to put up (with) being treated like a child sometimes, he is better off the live (living) with an American family which they (who) can help home. He will find kindness and support when he is new in the country. Also, he will speak English most of the time. www.test99.com

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A foreing (foreign) student studying in America is wise to live with an American family because when a foreing (foreign) student came (comes) to the United States he must make many important adjustment (adjustments). A foreing (foreign) student must change to survive in his new imvironment (environment). A foreing (foreign) student also learns how to take on responsibilities concerning his new family, he (; he) adopts (adapts) to their American life style (lifestyle) as they adopt (adapt) to his. It is a learning experience on both parts.www.test99.com
You have a (A student has an) advantage when living (he lives) with an American family. Because (because) they would (he will) learn the american (American) ways and customs better with an american (American) family than if they would live (he lived) with there (his) own homeboys (countrymen).www.test99.com
The american (American) family becomes a second family to the foreing (foreign) student. At times a foreing (foreign) student may get homesick; but having (having) a trustworthy second family can give him the security and acceptance he (that he) needs. He is probably use (used) to having a family around him, so he will feel safe if he lives with an American family. Then he must consider that he will be in a strange place. Everything will be new to you (him).www.test99.com
His American family can help him learn his way around. So (Therefore) foreing (a foreign student) is smart to live with an American family.www.test99.com

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My opinion about this subject is that it depends in (on) your level of comprehension regard (regarding) conversational english (English). In other words; (words,) if you understand a considerable amount of english (English) language, your best bet would be to chose (choose) living with an American family. But, if your comprehension level is so low, in which (that) a basic communication is not possible, then (it) would be wise to (for) you to choose living with people of your same country and (or) language.www.test99.com