[求助]这个作文怎么写？

fish1227

    

選擇感興趣的subject 重要還是為了將來找工作方便的subject 重要？為什麼？

wujie365

why we go to university? For our favor?obviosely not ,all what we do is to get a good job in the future.

Just as saying goes ,life were like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're gotta to get.But we should do something to hold the happiness.That's why we go to university .The happiness needs material to insure it. Without a good job it just like a dream . What we do now is to make the dream come ture.So our subject should connect to our job.

Life was not easy for any of us, we must live ,and above all, we must believe ourselves, we must believe each of us is able to do someting well. Chose a subject that relate to a future job will make it easy to continue your life after graduate. it will be helpful for you, and as already familiar with the job you can do it well! your confident surely will be increased!

大概方向应该就是这样吧！你再润色一下应该可以吧！呵呵，写的不好的帮我改正吧！哈哈

fish1227

太感谢了，思路真的很好，转为工资，正好可以套上以前写的作文，十分感谢啊
Life was not easy for any of us,(live never proved light-hearted for any of us be常可以用 prove替代，尤其是用在容易，难的时候。) we must live （must用得太多了，而且尽量不用、这种情态动词,可以换成have to ,is bound to ,need to 等，live感觉像在说我们活着，换成we have to support ourselves and our families)and above all, we must
believe ourselves, we must believe each of us is able to do someting
well(has the ability to perfect something we engaged in.） Chose(choose) a subject that relate（is related) to a future job will make it easy( benifit me) to
continue your(尽量别用第/二人称，对改卷人不尊重哦！） my) life after graduate( graduation). it will be helpful for you, and as
(+being)already familiar with the job you can do it well! your confident surely
will be increased!