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[求助]请亲爱的德克猪拍砖 JJ070114作文

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[求助]请亲爱的德克猪拍砖 JJ070114作文

亲爱的猪猪:对您景仰已久,恨相识太晚,未能得到更多真传!周六(3月8日)将赴战场,望能帮忙修改第一篇作文(发得战战兢兢),不胜感激!

(又修改了一些语法错误,恳请大家指点一二~)

2. Do drivers have to pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when traffic is in a great amount?

This is a world with prosperous economy, although a great deal of highways, overpasses, tunnels have been built in the big cities, it can’t keep pace with the increase rate of vehicles, especially the private cars, which impose heavy burden on the transportation. Hence some people suggest that drivers pay a fee for driving in busy city streets on rush hours, which I would like to hold positive view towards.

 

Perhaps the fundamental reason for my view lies in the fact that the large amount of cars have laid tremendous stress on the fragile city transportation. Cars crowded in busy city streets deteriorate the traffic, even to some extend, result in more possibilities of danger accidents. Once an accident occurs, a more serious traffic jam will bring up, which comes to a vicious cycle.

 

The consideration of pollution may also be attributable to my inclination. It is undoubtedly that the tail gas a car produces is harmful to the
                                
environment. With a large number of cars cramming on the streets which create a great deal poisonous gas, people’s health has been faced with numerous threaten against various diseases, which is not worth sacrificing.

 

Although some people may consider that this measure would bring out inconvenience for the people, I leave doubt on it. The public transportation infrastructure has developed maturely enough for people to go anywhere freely and quickly, provided that there is a friendly transportation environment in busy streets. For instance, people may choose to take bus, metro, taxi…and moreover, they are more economical and less pollutive.

 

From what have been discussed above, it is reasonably to draw the conclusion that to levy a fee from drivers is a necessary way to maintain a healthy transportation environment. On the other hand, it also urges people to reduce the use of private cars and pursue a public transportation tool instead.


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