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why people visit museums?

Worldwide travel is one of the dreams that most people chase desperately, for human have an inherent desire to explore the unknown places. There are plenty of ways to understand a place. Chatting with the local people, experiencing the culture by attending conventional festivals, and looking around the key points of interest are all wise choices. But if someone eager to comprehend the new places thoroughly and quickly, visiting the museum is a preferable choice.

Visiting the museum usually takes people no more than one day to go through the whole history of the new place. Most museums have brief introduction of the city, which guide the newcomers to form a primary impression of the place. It's always more accurate and objective than any city dwellers' expression. No one can know the city better than the experts who spending whole life on researching the history and development of it. As reading the brief but thorough introduction, which usually with vivid pictures, not only can the travelers see the landscape of the city now, but also learn how they developed.

After grasping the general information of the city, there are variety kinds of museums to fulfill the visitors' specific demands. For instance, if s/he is an art enthusiast, s/he will find the gallery, a museum of art, a paradise where s/he can experience the exotic visual impact which s/he has never had. From the point of my view, only visiting the landscape of a new place is too superficial to comprehend the spirit of the city. People can not learn all essential elements of it, of course, in a couple of days. But people should know the supreme one or the one attracting you best of it at least. For this purpose, museum is an optimal place.

There is another reason why people choose museum as an indispensable of their visit. The cozy circumstance is so attractive for people who endure a bad weather, for example, rainy, windy, or burning days. People don't need to worry about the inappropriate clothing will ruin their mood as it did outdoor, for the temperature in the museum is moderate all-year long. Just fix your attention on the exhibits, all you need have been prepared, food, beverage, souvenirs, chairs, restrooms, and so forth.

Some places we will never have second chance to reach, so the deep visit of it is necessary. Museum is the best choice for most visitors, that is why many people choose to visit them during the vacation.