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题目: Agree or disagree:the college years are the best time in a person's life.这是Barron模考第三套的独立作文题,小弟以前从来没有请别人看过作文,所以不知道我的水平究竟如何.只是觉得我的用词不够advanced.其他问题请大虾指出,先谢过了.    (PS:用了以前看的一个模版,如果这个模版不适合也请赐教,谢谢)

    Many people consider the college years as their golden time in life, I couldnot agree  more. There are numerous reasons why I hold this point of view and I would explore only a few primary ones here, as follows.
 

    The main reason for my propensity for collge time as the best time in life is because that in the college you can learn a variety of subjects and explore the unknown world with guidance as much as you want to. There are so many specilized professors to teach you,to guide you, and to lead you to the academic success of your own. This is a fantastic experiece and you will place the highest value on it in future.
   

     Another reason can be seen by everyone is that college life will cultivate your team spirit and people skill. Most of the assignment is carried out by teams. During the process of team working, you will learn to communicate with the other members, motivate the team's morale high and encourage everyone to work hard and on schedule. This is a surviving ability in today's society. Because when we work, no one will be hero by itself.

     What is more, in college you can develop your relationship with the professors and classmates. You will meet various people and some of them may have matching personality and interest with. Thus you make more and more friends. Their resources are much more than yours, so when you are in trouble in future, they will stand by you ,cheer you up and help you go through the tough times. 

     In a word, college years offer you various knowledge, team ability and friendship. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that the college years are the best time in a person's life.