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发表于 2007-11-17 03:15:00 | 只看该作者

要考试了,发一篇作文


    

171 Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.


I like to bring with my laptop as an additional
staff for a trip. Nowadays computer has become the most part of daily life,
it's very difficult and boring if we go out without my laptop. I will give some
reasons to illustrate as followed.


    

In my opinion, the first reason is that
laptop is a best tool to plan you trip and makes you feel very easy. During traveling
there is much more things need to be concerned than those at home. The most
frequent problems may include checking weather situation, making hotel
reservation, booking airline ticket and find exact and precise map information.
Fortunately, we are living in a society with a powerful tool, which is internet
and we could search a lager quantities of information from it conveniently and
with low cost, some time even free. Since lots of public places such as
restaurants and hotels already providing free or cheap wireless access
services, I could use my laptop to look through the trip guard website which provides
online services from the weather to discount air ticket even when I am in
mobile. Many time and energy will be saved to let me focus on more important
things about the trip.


    

Second, with a computer in the trip, my
work or study could be continued without stop. If it's a business trip, you may
need to carry many documents, such as presentations and contract files. Storing
in the disk of computer will be a best way and you can make some changes if you
want during the trip. Without a computer, fulfilling the tasks of business must
be very hard and seems more time consumed. Even when you are in a tourism trip,
you still can do some study in the evening or reading some E-book in the sea
beach with a breeze. I am sure you will find more fun during the reading and
study in these surroundings.


    

Some people will argue that the computer is
too heavy to carry in the trip. But with the unprecedented revolution in the
computer industry, you could easily find a light one which has a weight in 1 lbs to 2
lbs
. It's all depends on the price you can afford.


    

Laptop has become a standard staff when
people plan a trip. It's help you finishing you business tasks and keeping
communicate with your friends and family members. Since it's such a powerful
tool and also brings people much funs than ever in the trip, I will definitely
sticky to it and strongly recommend to my friends to do so. 


沙发
发表于 2007-11-17 11:02:00 | 只看该作者

总体上感觉不错. LZ加油

另外可以多练练agree/disagree 的类型作文.

板凳
发表于 2007-11-19 03:56:00 | 只看该作者
注意much 和many的使用,还有最高级要用the
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