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Zhang1986

    

Should government invest on space exploration
or on the basic needs of the earth

    

 

    

Have you ever caught sight of poor children
begging at the street corner in a bleak winter night? Have you already been
inflicted by respiratory diseases? Have you once complained that advanced
schools are inaccessible to your daughter and son? If you have experienced such
depressing matters, seldom would you encourage government pour money into space
explorations, for the basic needs of the earth have not been satisfied yet,
which are closely connected with your profits. Taking all these factors into
account, I strongly maintain that government should invest more money to solve
the present problems existing on the earth.

    

 

    

A painful truth is that the homeless and
the unemployed are ubiquitous in the world, not to mention those leading an
impoverished life, sparing no money to afford healthcare, who just consider to
be stuffed as their terminal goals. Such people, the lowest class in our
society, cannot be neglected, as they represent a key factor contributed to
social security. Provided that little attention attached to them, and their living
conditions are worsen and worsen; just imagine what devastating thing would
happen. Spurred by anxiety and dissatisfaction, violent rages caused by poor
people are never rare incidents through the history. To comfort them, and
accordingly build up a more peaceful social order, the government, surely,
should make endeavor to improve their situations by spending money.

    

 

    

Another aspect that cannot be ignored, as
it has come to be known by everyone, is the aggravating pollution. Not only
those who living in the urban areas, but also the villagers, who consistently
are thought as breathing clean air everyday, are prone to the severe
environmental problems. Long lines standing at the respiratory department of
the hospital has become spectacular scenery in this country. Moreover,
terrifying statistics has already posed a warning to us, as increasing numbers
of people died annually because of exposing to such dirty and toxic air. Thus,
abundant money should be paid by government to create an inhabitable
environment for people.

    

 

    

Education, as it were, has never failed to
be the thorny problem confronted by the government, for high standard schools
are in great shortage, causing many school age children to attend remote
schools or even take up self-learning at home, which would definitely exert negative
impacts on their future；Consequently，a dim prospect of the country. My nephew, for instance, usually
wastes three hours on communing and get exhausted when arriving home very late
in the evening, feeling like doing nothing. Therefore, a great number of modern
schools are in urgent need, so the government should found a special fund on
this issue.

    

 

    

Space exploration, certainly should be on
the top agenda of government, as such activity contributes enormously to the
science and technology, planning an appealing blueprint to our human beings'
expecting future. However, considering piles of current serious problems have
not been solved, government should put emphasis on meeting the needs of the
earth and the people living on it, in which way, a harmonious society would be
foreseeable.