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楼主
发表于 2007-11-9 23:34:00 | 只看该作者

超感人新作

In my past experience, there were lots of events affect my value and the opinion of the world .the affairs not only have a tremendous influence on my outlook but also vary my lifestyle.

Throughout my young life, the huge thing I have experienced is my grandpa's death that really hurt my feeling. Once how happy we are when I and my grandpa fly the kite in the park. When we feel tried we lie on the grass. The people surrounding us thought what a harmonious picture it is. However, now my grandpa is lying in the dump tomb. I can not see him any more. From that, I can not make any close friend, even my parents. Because I am afraid my friend may pass away anytime, and i can not stand any death happened to people whom I love.

The secondly to the thing that effect me a lot is my friend betray me Once I have warm-loved girl, on front her beautiful cheek ,i have no courage to say "I love you' to her. So I told my best friend jack to help me to state my love to her. While I don not my friend jack had loved her long time. He told girl he love him, not me. My best friend betrayed me that really hurt my fragile feeling .Since that I view any guys as a man who will betray his friend. 

Although I had experience so merciless events, my mother told me don not give up, don not lost your self. My mum’s words encourage me, and I think I should be a rough boy. I can illustrate and prove I am a boy who can not be defeated by anything. Since that I become positive and easy-going man, because I know nothing I beat forever but yourself.

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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-9 23:35:00 | 只看该作者
顶啊
板凳
发表于 2007-11-10 01:36:00 | 只看该作者

sound too sad and pesimistic.

good luck

地板
发表于 2007-11-10 01:45:00 | 只看该作者

Although I had experienced so merciless events

be a tough boy

right?

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-10 14:33:00 | 只看该作者

yeah

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