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完全不用难词难句 搞定托福作文 求大家一定要看特别是十一楼的帖子

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发表于 2007-10-27 21:14:00 | 只看该作者

完全不用难词难句 搞定托福作文 求大家一定要看特别是十一楼的帖子

Nowadays,food haves become easier to prepare .Haves this change improved the way people live?

The twentieth century has brought with it marry advances. With those advances, human lives have changed dramatically. in some ways life is worse ,but mostly it is better. Changes in food preparation methods.For example ,have improved our lives greatly.

The convenience of preparing food today is amazing .Even stoves have gotten too slow for us .microwavecooking is much easier. We can press a few buttons and a meal is completely in just a short time .people  used to spend

hours preparing  an oven cooked meal, and now they can use that time for other, better things Plus ,there are all kinds of portable  ,prepackaged foods we can buy. Heat them in the office microwave, and lunch at work is quickand easy.

Food preparation today allows for more variety. with refrigerators and freezes, we can preserve a lot of different foods in our homes. Since technology makes cooking so much faster .people are willing to make several dishes for even a small meal. Parents are more likely to let children be picky, now that they can easily beat them up some prepackaged macaroni and cheese on the side .Needless to say ,adults living in the same house may have very different eating habits as well. If they do not want to cook a lot of differentdishes, it is common now to eat at restaurants several times a week.

Healthful eating is also easier than ever now. When people cook, they can use new fat substitutes and cooking sprays to cut fat and calories. this reduces the risk of heart disease

and high cholesterol. Additionally, we can buy fruits and vegetables fresh, frozen or canned.Tey are easy to prepare, so many of us eat more of nutritious items daily. A hundred years

ago ,you could not imagine the process of taking some  frozen fruit and ice from freezer, adding some low-fat yogurt from a plastic cup and some juice from a can in the refrigerator, and whipping up a low-fat  smoothie in the blender!

Our lifestyle is fast, but people still like good food .What new food preparation technology has given us is more choices .Today, we can prepare food that is more convenient, and

Healthier, and or greater variety than ever before in the history.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-27 21:19:00 | 只看该作者
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板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-27 21:30:00 | 只看该作者
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地板
发表于 2007-10-27 22:04:00 | 只看该作者
爽阿....
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发表于 2007-10-28 12:06:00 | 只看该作者
是搞定了,但我觉得这篇文章写的不怎么样
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发表于 2007-10-28 13:47:00 | 只看该作者

"food haves ...", LZ是在搞笑吧?

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-28 18:40:00 | 只看该作者

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发表于 2007-10-28 19:08:00 | 只看该作者

LZ, 这篇文章的大错小误太多了, 实在是改不过来. 建议先放到WORD里, 用"拼写和语法"自己先检查一遍. 另外, 注意时态, 注意词的搭配, 注意标点符号...

举几个例子:

1. "The twentieth century has brought with it marry advances."

20世纪已经过去了, 所以应该用 had.

marry -> many

advances -> advantages

2. "Healthful eating is also easier than ever now. "

healthful -> healthy

3. "Our lifestyle is fast"

"生活风格"为什么会很快? 应该是 "The pace of our life is fast."

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发表于 2007-10-28 19:58:00 | 只看该作者
LZ还是现实一点吧,不用一些复杂的句式和词汇基本上是写不出很漂亮的作文的
考试时候要用这篇作文的话很难得分
Changes in food preparation methods.For example ,have improved our lives greatly.
中间的那个句号应该是个逗号,要不然前面那个东西的谓语丢了。ETS非常厌恶这种错误


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 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-29 12:12:00 | 只看该作者
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