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我28号上战场。至今作文没有练习过。到今晚才知道昨晚大概怎么考法。   特练笔作文一篇,希望各位达人帮忙指正,以免我不解考官之意,在考场上翘辫子死得很难看! 大家一定要帮忙拍一下!因为我实在没时间复习和练习了,这个是我第一次写,估计也没有时间写第二次了! 题目是说:是应该和similar的人结婚还是different的人。 我的作文: The most desirable and admirable marriage tends to be a marriage that is sustainable, endurable and full of supports form both sides. Just like the marriage in the pattern of my parents', the two similar ones fell in love, got married and then spent the rest of their lives, which is typical enjoyable marriage, at lease to me. The key to their happy marriage could be attributed to the similarity between them, which i think also works to all the other marriage because the similarity between them has been playing an indispensable role in their relationship. It is something like oil, booster or even the additive to make food taste better. We can never deny the fact that similar person always share mutual experience and have the same expectation for life. This means, they will fall in love much easily than people who have quite different characters. What would you like to do with the person you met at the first time if you just hold a contradictory view with his? Probably, you will argue, or at lease, you will not fell in love with him. However, the possibility for people who share the mutual life experience and hold the same expectation for life to have a romance is much greater. It will also facilitate their talk and makes their communication more smooth, funny and impressive to each other as well. When people get married, the following problem they would be faced with is to keep the relationship, say, the marriage going both smoothly and endurably. How could two people who tend to quarrelling with each other achieve this? It's unimaginable. Difference people will encounter with such problem as argument, quarrel or even fight, which could be fatal to marriage. Probably, the relationship would have to end up with divorce. Those who are similar to each other have more inclination to have a sustainable marriage than the couple composed by two of different characters, because they will have less argument, more harmonies, which all lead to a more smooth relationship. Within such relationship, the marriage tends to be last lone and the promise of ";love you forever" will be realized with a higher possibility. I, to some extend, envy my parent's marriage because they seldom quarrel with each other. When I go deep into their relationship, I noticed the key to their success is the similarity between them. Everyone is looking for a smooth and long-lasting relationship. My suggestion is that you look around for those who have marriage for long and you will find most of them are similar to each other. 谢谢大家指教!真的来不及了!!!!  |