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题目：Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live?
Currently, people tend to make food easier in the technologically advanced world. The time of preparing food over several procedures for hours even for days has gone forever. A multitude of people around me extol the virtue of those easier-prepared food because they have changed their lives tremendously. Oppositely, others are forever complaining about the serious consequences they bring to their lives. My personal experiences guide to the belief that making food preparation become easier has indeed changed the way life is.
No one can be blind to the huge convenience those easier-prepared food, Which are resulted from the great technological improvement, bring to us. If one still remember the massy in the kitchen in the past, with unbearable cooking time for hours on the stove, then he must give the warmest hug to the fantastic micro wave. Just press the button and sit down to wait for just minutes, one can start the amazing dinner right away. That is the lifestyle! Plus, with prepackaged food which is also portable, people can easily enjoy the office lunch while saving time for work.
Moreover, these is no time is as great as nowadays because our food become more and more diverse day by day. With the invention of refrigerator, people could consume whatever they like to eat without any seasonal choice. Meanwhile, due to the agricultural development, people could also taste some exotic food they may have never seen in the past. Because of the uncountable restaurants stand beside the roads, people are more accessible to all kinds of food without spending time to cook themselves.
However, that food has become easier to prepare still has minor detriment to the human being is undeniable. The micro wave radiance, for instance, usually do harm to people’s health more or less. Sometimes, those restaurants owners make food in a harsh in order to maximize profits while ignoring the qualities. But, if you can do without the few deficiencies the easier-prepared food bring to you, then you may find the life is far better then you could imagine. 
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