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Do you agree and disagree with the following statement?

Sujects such as art, music, drama should be a part of every child’s basic education.

Task 2

Children education has raised many people concern for ages. Many educators and teachers are studying the children’s developing features; discussing and tailoring the most proper curriculum and courses for children nowadays. For building up the all round curriculum for young children, some educators have add some courses and subjects like art, music and drama into children’s regular curriculum.  As far as I concern, these subjects are required in the children education have positive impacts to children and can sitmulate the children’s development and skills as well.

 

First and foremost, the art and music courses can develop and improve children’s cognition skill which is vital for them to get the general rules and ideas about the objects and nature in the world. Take painting class for example, while children learn and name different colors, they also ultilize their fine motor and imagination to creat a wonderful picture. Furthermore, some class like drama also can cultivate children’s role cognition and social skill which are primate skills for living in the society when they grow up. Therefore, these courses are great marriage of children’s developing feature and skills culitvation, which promote the quality of children education.

 

Consistence with the goal of children education---“no child will left behind” claimed by Gorge W. Bush, the president of the United Stated of America, children are the further of tomorrow, everything has done right now should be contributed to the sparkling furture. As result, the early childhood education is the most importmant thing all the people should concern, esp. children’s parents and teachers who can teach children more knowledge and skills.

 

It is necessary to make children education be more effient and comprehesive, to put sujects like art, music and drama into the regular curriculum in the early childhood education is a wise decision made by those briliant educators and teachers. I totally appreciate that what they have done to our further---children.

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Do you agree and disagree with the following statement?

Subjects such as art, music, drama should be a part of every child’s basic education.

Children education has raised many people concern for ages. Many educators and teachers are studying the children's developing features; discussing and tailoring the most proper curriculum and courses for children nowadays. For building up the all round curriculum for young children, some educators have add some courses and subjects like art, music and drama into children's regular curriculum.  As far as I concern, these subjects are required in the children education have positive impacts to children and can stimulate the children's development and skills as well.

First and foremost, the art and music courses can develop and improve children's cognition skill which is vital for them to get the general rules and ideas about the objects and nature in the world. Take painting class for example, while children learn and name different colors, they also utilize their fine motor and imagination to create a wonderful picture. Furthermore, some class like drama also can cultivate children's role cognition and social skill which are primate skills for living in the society when they grow up. Therefore, these courses are great marriage of children's developing feature and skills cultivation, which promote the quality of children education.

Consistence with the goal of children education---"no child will left behind" claimed by Gorge W. Bush, the president of the United Stated of America, children are the further of tomorrow, everything has been done right now should be contributed to foster the sparkling future. As result, the early childhood education is the most important thing everyone should concern, esp. children's parents and teachers who can teach children more knowledge and skills.

In conclusion, it is necessary to make children education be more efficient and comprehensive.  To put subjects like art, music and drama into the regular curriculum in the early childhood education is a wise decision made by those brilliant educators and teachers, because young children not only learn specific and practical knowledge like maths and physics, but also improve their cognitive and social skills by some art courses.  I totally appreciate that what children education system has done to our further---children.