第一次计时25min写独立作文，请nn们不吝指点

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People attend college or university for many different reasons(for example, new experiences,

career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or

university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

Why people attend university? Some believe that attending university can help you to

accumulate useful knowledge in a variety of fields. Some say that colleges provide you with

greater opportunities to get access to better jobs in the future. In my opinion, people

attend college or university mainly for three reasons.

 

First of all, it is ideal for you to learn more knowledge, especially knowledge of a certain

academic category. Employers nowadays tend to have a fond of specialties. Universities, by

providing you with knowledgeable professors, abundant books, even laboratories for you to

practice skills in mimic environments, equip us so well that we, in most cases, become people

with great potential when we graduate from school. In other words, college is helpful for us

to formulate more and better career opportunities in the future.

 

Secondly, friendship is also an inevitable concern when discussing this choice. Attending

university enables you to meet different students with similar educational backgrounds. The

similarity in educational background, on one hand, makes it easier for you to share interest

and goals, which means you can enjoy yourself through making a variety of friends, on the

other hand, however, can become an advantage when you leave school and begin your own career

or business. You have probably gathered numerous friends in similar field with you, which

may be of great help in the unknown future.

 

Last but not least, College helps you to formulate a more profound way of thinking. The

ability to analyze critically can be essential when you are making an important decision or

trying to solve a problem. Through attending lectures of renowned professors, you can easily

 get access to different ways of thinking, which helps you to form your own.

30min的独立写作，给自己定的25min写完，剩下时间检查。今天第一天在电脑上敲，先写在记事本上，然后放到word上，红字是错别字，已改正。这篇写了25min没写完。。。字数也不够。。。紧迫感油然而生。GMAT也有考过，750，4.5，作文始终弱项。不知如何突破，现有跟读李笑来185的范文，每篇两遍，已经跟了110篇。9月8号考试，打算写作总共写10篇，回头还要研究OG纲领，恳请各位nn指点^

icyfirechen

文章写得很好啊！

字数多少 300+就可以了

lz的作文保持练习的话应该有25+

加油 早点看og 多体会

s_flora_g

非常感谢指点，我写的字数比较少，大概300左右。恩，og是永远的大纲。^谢谢鼓励

shiningsky

文章中you用得太多, 显得很不正式, 这是中国学生的通病．