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 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-1 14:56:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用greenpuma在2007-9-1 4:00:00的发言:

In the twenty years, people will lead a more leisure life. Agree? 

 

Opposing (opposing is not accurate here) the common assumption that in twenty years people will lead a more leisure
                leisurable life, I believe that people’s lives will be getting
                become much busier and unhappier in two decades from now due to fiercer competition
                on
                in the job market, faster pace in which information is shared, and much more dependentency on the technologies. (A, B and C)

 

I predict that the competition on  in the job market will become very keen in twenty years. One of the reasons is that citizens will understand how important education is. They will send their children to quality schools so that their children will
                in order to receive a good education. And they will also try hard to make sure that their children can receive work-related trainings in order to land on (same problem, who are going to land on? They or their children?) a great job positions in the future. However, with more highly trained professionals
                jumping into the job market, the competition of getting a job position will be fierce as well. Perhaps, the number of people who will hold PhDs will double in twenty years. But they won’t be happy when facing
                about the difficulties of finding a decent job on
                in the job market. They are less likely to lead a leisure life (yes, you can use leisure life here)!

 

Thanks to (no thanks to something that hasn't happened yet) the Internet and the computer technology, sharing and gathering information can be
                done within will only cost nanoseconds in twenty years. However, will that
                it be easy to handle too much information that is swarming to you at the same time? I heard a lot from people who complain that they wish they could only have only one choice. Then, the decision making for them will
                would not be painstaking any more. ‘The simpler, the better’ is always in people’s mind. However, it’s
                will be an impossible mission
                a mission that is impossible to accomplish if you have more than a dozen of choices when determining something. And that will happen in twenty years.

 

Dependency on the day-to-day use of technologies will
                would make people feel uncomfortable in case they’re
                were deprived of using those technologies. For instance, people all have personal email addresses for themselves right now. They reply
                rely on this
                email technology to be connected to the society. However, if the internet is were down, they will
                would grow uneasy because they would
                will feel that they are lost.  In twenty years, many new technologies will be marketed and they will become common for citizens. However, while
                when citizens place too much dependency on those technologies, they will become even unhappier due to malfunctions of those technologies.  I would say that people living in a time twenty years from now will have more worries. They just cannot free themselves to enjoy a peaceful, leisure life.

 

Based on the above reasons, I cannot support the rosy prediction that people will lead a more leisure life (life of more leisure or more leisurable life?) in twenty years. In contrast, On the contrary, they will be much busier and unhappier than ever before.


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22#
发表于 2007-9-1 19:48:00 | 只看该作者

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发表于 2007-9-1 23:46:00 | 只看该作者
thank you, weizhao78
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发表于 2007-9-2 00:54:00 | 只看该作者

Letting a friend make mistake is better than doing something that may destroy the friendship. Agree?

 

Would you feel guilty if you don’t directly point out a possible mistake that is going to be made by one of your friends? Would you be regretted afterwards if you miss an opportunity to help a friend avoid a mistake? Personally, I think that letting a friend run into mistakes is the last thing to do in terms of maintaining a good friendship.

 

First of all, a friend of yours won’t trust you anymore if he realizes that you are the person with whom he can only spend happy time. He simply cannot rely on you for your genuine help and trustable opinion, when it comes to hash times; however, what’s the friendship really about? In definition, it means a relationship between or among people who grow a strong social bond through which they care, support, and enjoy each other. If you cannot spare even a single minute to help a friend who suffers a difficult time, you are going to miss one of the most important parts in the friendship. And that part is ‘support’. If you are unable to support and care your friends, how can you still call them as your friends?   

 

Of course, people have some concerns toward maintaining the friendship. They are afraid that their friendship will be undermined if they get into friends’ personal life too much. But, this cannot be used as an excuse to let friends make big mistakes. If a friend has drunk too much, you must stop him from driving home at . However, if there is something such as a small argument that’s going to happen between two of your friends, you might want to leave that small matter to those two friends and let them work out the problem. Being a good friend to other people, you must learn how to judge different things. If you feel and think that a big mistake is going to happen to a friend of yours, you should directly point out the possibility and offer your help to the friend. And that’s where a great friendship comes from.  

 

Nowadays, people lead a busy life. Sometimes they are quite stressed out. Statistics indicate that mental-related problems have been increasing for twenty years. However, statistics also show that if people can maintain a good friendship, they will be less likely to encounter such problems. People will turn to friends when they feel that they really want to talk with somebody. Perhaps, that is a way to alleviate mental stresses from all directions of the modern life.

 

People long for a genuine friendship. They will lead a happier life if they are able to maintain a strong relationship with a bunch of dear friends. They can hang out together for fun, they can support each other when dealing with social matters, and more importantly they rely on friends for their opinion and suggestions to maintain a healthy and happy life. Toast to Friendship!

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Weizhao78: i wonder if you can help me with this piece of writing as well...... i really need some help........

my test is scheduled on sep.12 two weeks from now. My goal is to score at least 28 in the writing section.

thank you for your help.... 'Toast to Friendship"

PS - may i know your msn? mine is ibt_120(A) hotmail.com

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-2 01:36:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用greenpuma在2007-9-2 0:54:00的发言:

Letting a friend make mistake is better than doing something that may destroy the friendship. Agree?

 

Would you feel guilty if you don’t directly point out a possible mistake that is going to be made by one of your friends? that your friend is going to make? Would you be regretted
                regret afterwards if you miss an opportunity to help a friend avoid a mistake? Personally, I think that letting a friend run into mistakes is the last thing to do in terms of maintaining a good friendship.

 

First of all, a friend of yours your friend won’t trust you anymore if he or she realizes that you are the person with whom he or she can only spend happy time. He or she (try they if you want to avoid gender issue here) simply cannot rely on you for your genuine help and trustable opinion, when it comes to hash times; however, what’s the friendship really about? In definition, it means a relationship between or among people who grow a strong social bond through which they care, support, and enjoy each other. If you cannot spare even a single minute to help a friend who suffers a difficult time, you are going to miss one of the most important parts in the friendship. And that part is ‘support’. If you are unable to support and care about your friends, how can you still call them as your friends?   

 

Of course, people have some concerns toward maintaining the friendship. They are afraid that their friendship will be undermined if they get into friends’ personal life
                lives too much. But, this cannot be used as an excuse to let friends make big mistakes. If a friend has drunk too much, you must stop him from driving home at midnight. However, if there is something such as a small argument that’s going to happen between two of your friends, you might want to leave that small matter to those two friends
                them and let them work out the problem. Being a good friend to other people, you must learn how to judge different things. If you feel and think that a big mistake is going to happen to a friend of yours, you should directly point out the possibility and offer your help to the friend. And that’s where a great friendship comes from.  

 

Nowadays, people lead a busy life. Sometimes they are quite stressed out. Statistics indicate that mental-related problems have been increasing for twenty years. However, statistics also show that if people can maintain a good friendship, they will be less likely to encounter such problems. People will turn to friends when they feel that they really want to talk with somebody. Perhaps, that is a way to alleviate mental stresses from all directions of the modern life.

 

People long for a genuine friendship. They will lead a happier life if they are able to maintain a strong relationship with a bunch of dear friends. They can hang out together for fun, they can support each other when dealing with social matters, and, more importantly, they can rely on friends for their opinion and suggestions to maintain a healthy and happy life. Toast to Friendship!

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Weizhao78: i wonder if you can help me with this piece of writing as well...... i really need some help........

my test is scheduled on sep.12 two weeks from now. My goal is to score at least 28 in the writing section.

thank you for your help.... 'Toast to Friendship"

PS - may i know your msn? mine is ibt_120(A) hotmail.com

你的英语很不错啊, 28分没问题。Good luck.

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发表于 2007-9-3 11:04:00 | 只看该作者

hi, Weizhao78,

thank you...

I still have a question....

How did you deal with speaking question number 5 and 6?

I feel that there are just too much information to generalize.

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-4 12:44:00 | 只看该作者

i dont think i have anything to share with you on this. i only got 24 on speaking section. it's a shame.

if i get 115+ on the test of 8/17 with 26+ on speaking, i will come back and answer your question.

28#
发表于 2007-9-4 12:57:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用greenpuma在2007-8-31 11:00:00的发言:

楼主能不能把独立作文贴上来,让大家看看究竟什么样的文章可得28分。

谢谢!!!

恭喜恭喜!和楼上一样,想看看你NN的作文!

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发表于 2007-9-4 13:09:00 | 只看该作者

LZ,你8.11和8.17的都考拉?

可以在一个星期里考两次的啊~

水平这么高还考两次

30#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-4 13:24:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用Ciliegia在2007-9-4 13:09:00的发言:

LZ,你8.11和8.17的都考拉?

可以在一个星期里考两次的啊~

水平这么高还考两次

我是8.10 & 8.17两天考的,应该不能算一个星期吧? 

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