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 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-31 12:59:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用greenpuma在2007-8-31 11:00:00的发言:

楼主能不能把独立作文贴上来,让大家看看究竟什么样的文章可得28分。

谢谢!!!

我好像在上面已经回答了吧,就是八股文,别犯句法,语法错误就能拿高分
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发表于 2007-8-31 19:29:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用weizhao78在2007-8-31 12:59:00的发言:

我好像在上面已经回答了吧,就是八股文,别犯句法,语法错误就能拿高分

能不能把你的28分作文贴上来。框架只是一个基础。。。。

我想看看你是如何遣词造句的。。。

感谢!!!

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发表于 2007-8-31 22:05:00 | 只看该作者
111与117有什么本质的区别么???
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发表于 2007-8-31 22:26:00 | 只看该作者

big ox...

congratulations

不过考了111差不多了吧~除非能再考120...

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-31 23:33:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用greenpuma在2007-8-31 19:29:00的发言:

能不能把你的28分作文贴上来。框架只是一个基础。。。。

我想看看你是如何遣词造句的。。。

感谢!!!


[此贴子已经被作者于2007-9-1 1:16:12编辑过]
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发表于 2007-9-1 00:55:00 | 只看该作者

sorry for misleading you...

i meant wheather you could post your essay on the testing date of August 11th.

I think that topic is 'do you agree with the following statement that the only way government can do to energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity?'

many thanks.

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-1 01:15:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用greenpuma在2007-9-1 0:55:00的发言:

sorry for misleading you...

i meant wheather you could post your essay on the testing date of August 11th.

I think that topic is 'do you agree with the following statement that the only way government can do to energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity?'

many thanks.

啊,这我怎么可能想得起来?
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发表于 2007-9-1 04:00:00 | 只看该作者

In the twenty years, people will lead a more leisure life. Agree? 

 

Opposing the common assumption that in twenty years people will lead a more leisure life, I believe that people’s lives will be getting much busier and unhappier two decades from now due to fiercer competition on the job market, faster sharing of information, and much more dependent on the technologies.

 

I predict that the competition on the job market will become very keen in twenty years. One of the reasons is that citizens understand how important education is. They send their children to quality schools in order to receive a good education. And they also try hard to make sure that their children can receive work-related trainings in order to land on a great job position in the future. However, with more highly trained professional jumping into the job market, the competition of getting a job position will be fierce as well. Perhaps, the number of people who will hold PhDs will double in twenty years. But they won’t be happy about the difficulties of finding a decent job on the job market. They are less likely to lead a leisure life!

 

Thanks to the Internet and the computer technology, sharing and gathering information can be done within nanoseconds in twenty years. However, will that be easy to handle too much information that is swarming to you at the same time? I heard a lot from people who complain that they wish they could only have one choice. Then, the decision making for them will not be painstaking any more. ‘The simpler, the better’ is always in people’s mind. However, it’s a mission that is impossible to accomplish if you have more than a dozen of choices when determining something. And that will happen in twenty years.

 

Dependency on the day-to-day use of technologies will make people feel uncomfortable in case they’re deprived of using those technologies. For instance, people all have email addresses for themselves right now. They reply on this technology to be connected to the society. However, if the internet is down, they will grow uneasy because they will feel that they are lost.  In twenty years, many new technologies will be marketed and they will become common for citizens. However, while citizens place too much dependency on those technologies, they will become even unhappier due to malfunctions of those technologies.  I would say that people living in a time twenty years from now will have more worries. They just cannot free themselves to enjoy a peaceful, leisure life.

 

Based on the above reason, I cannot support the rosy prediction that people will lead a more leisure life in twenty years. In contrast, they will be much busier and unhappier than ever before.


[此贴子已经被作者于2007-9-1 4:00:55编辑过]
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发表于 2007-9-1 04:02:00 | 只看该作者

i wrote this essay. please comment on it.

thank you.

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-1 07:31:00 | 只看该作者

greenpuma,  you look serious on writing. I will comment on your essay after work. Good luck.

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