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vivian_huang

汇报，在http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=23&replyid=218877&id=26199&page=1&skin=0&Star=7的几个NN的指导下，彻底理解限定性修饰和非限定性修饰的用法！！！

PS: 看CD上的讨论非常重要！

vivian_huang

发帖想召集9月底考试的G友，但是好像没啥回应。。。。

tanggp

vivian：今天的GMAT讨论会，你没有参加，大家等你很久，有些失望。欢迎你下周日一定来。下周日我们讨论GWD2，3，4，5，6套题。

同时也欢迎9月底考G者高手参加。

我的MSN：stiwen74(A) hotmail.com

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-8-19 20:16:33编辑过]

vivian_huang

tanggp,这个周末身体不舒服，所以没有出门，因为没有你的即时联系方式，所以未能联系到你，真是很抱歉，让大家失望了。。

我回站内短信给你了，请查收。 

vivian_huang

8月19日复习日记

今天终于全部完成OG10 SC的23道重复做错的题目的彻底分析。

 

考虑到自己的弱项：语法全划线题，就把大全内的全划线题都提出来，准备彻底地折磨一下大脑！！！

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-8-19 22:06:51编辑过]

vivian_huang

昨晚不知道咋地，就是困。。。床上一倒，睡着了。。。。没有复习。

忏悔！！！！！！！！！！！！

vivian_huang

8月20日复习计划， 考试倒计时31天。。。。。

vivian_huang

以下是引用vivian_huang在2007-8-19 21:23:00的发言：

8月19日复习日记

今天终于全部完成OG10 SC的23道重复做错的题目的彻底分析。

 

考虑到自己的弱项：语法全划线题，就把大全内的全划线题都提出来，准备彻底地折磨一下大脑！！！

8月19日的复习日记中提到，我将语法大全内的全划线题基本整理出来，用来折磨大脑。。。果然不妙。。。

下面是很丢人的结果：

共21题，对9题，正确率 37.5%

vivian_huang

语法总结专项===〉全划线题总结分析

题号参照语法大全“全部全真题987道”内的编号解释说明：
    

l       蓝色字体是我选的答案，如果出现红色的答案选项，说明正确答案其实是红色的选项，而蓝色的是我的错误选项，如果不存在红色选项，即说明该题正确；
     

l       最下面的表格内写的是解题思路，如有谬误清多多指正！

30．A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered as a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.
   

(A) A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered as a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama. [Consider as 错误表达]

(B) Considered to be a delicacy fit for a gourmet by most Japanese, genmai-cha is a special green tea that contains brown rice, virtually unavailable outside Yokohama. [Consider to be 错误表达]

(C) A special Japanese green tea called genmai-cha contains brown rice and is considered a gourmet delicacy by most Japanese, though it is virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.

(D) Most Japanese consider genmai-cha, a special green tea which contains brown rice, as a delicacy virtually unavailable outside Yokohama.[ Consider as 错误表达]（C）
   

(E) Though virtually unavailable outside Yokohama（是否也需要考虑逻辑主语一致性？）, most Japanese consider genmai-cha, a special green tea that contains brown rice, a gourmet delicacy.[前置部分与逻辑主语不一致]

解题思路：A选项，即原文与正确选项唯一差异在consider as的错误修正，因此，本题解题思路在于读原文时应该发现consider这一常见的语法错误：加 as 或 to ==〉排除 A,B,D 在C和E之间，E的表达比较怪异，而且句子断开，插入成分多，==〉选C 另外（TBD）E选项的前半句可能存在连词though引导的成分没有完整主谓结构的错误（不是分确定。。）

31    star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
   

(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.[
   分词在句末，可以做伴随动作，逻辑主语=句子主语或做伴随结果，有因果关系，没有看出A为什么错。。]

(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole. [参照OG 245的批判：黄色标出的部分is called a “squinting modifier”，引起修饰对象的歧义，既可修饰前面的stage，也可以修饰后面的a black hole]
   

(C) After passing through a red giant stage(错误修饰后面的中心词mass), a star’s mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.（D）
   

(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage（错误修饰mass）, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

解题思路：B，C，E选项的分词部分或介词引导的成分，放在句子中间，产生修饰对象可前可后的歧义；A选项为何不选未解？？??==恳请指点                    考点：修辞，分词引导或介词引导成分位于句中的修饰歧义

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-8-22 0:05:49编辑过]

vivian_huang

53    According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.

(A) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which has already been approaching 19 pounds a year, will achieve 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.[主谓间有插入成分，且错误使用被动语态从句修饰US]

(B) Already approaching 19 pounds a year in the United States(与后面的逻辑主语：association不一致), the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.

(C) The National Pasta association predicts by the twenty-first century[介词短语位于句子中间，引起修饰歧义] that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, which[错误修饰US,逻辑应该修饰前面的per-capita Consumption] is already approaching 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.

(D) By the twenty-first century,[语法上修饰协会，逻辑上应该修饰consumption] the National Pasta Association predicts that per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States, having already approached 19 pounds a year, will reach 30 pounds a year.（E）

(E) According to the National Pasta Association, per-capita consumption of pasta in the United States is already approaching 19 pounds a year and will reach 30 pounds a year by the twenty-first century.[主谓间没有其它插入成分，简洁易懂]

解题思路：划线部分无明显的代词指代或主谓一致性或习惯用法等绝对性错误后，重点看句子结构，分析修饰的逻辑合理性                              考点：修辞，介词引导成分位于句中的修饰歧义                                 ==〉修饰的逻辑问题 句子特征：但凡考这种修辞逻辑的题目，选项中间的差异明显有介词短语或分词短语或非限定性定语从句的大挪移，此时应该重点关注修辞的逻辑合理性！

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．57             Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

(A) Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.[过去分词引导的前置结构与句子逻辑主语不一致]

(B) Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits. .[过去分词引导的前置结构与句子逻辑主语不一致]

(C) The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.[不是十分清楚C选项的排除原因，但是that引导的从句修饰wages不简洁；added to the increase 可能有错，不如in addition to的表达更符合语法习惯？？？]

(D) In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.（E）[定语从句引导的修饰成分不如E选项的过去分词引导成分修饰名次来得简洁]

(E) In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

解题思路：过去分词引导的前置成分，可以预测考点多半与逻辑主语的判定有关                              考点：过去分词引导成分与后面逻辑主语的一致性