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TWE第170谢谢大家帮忙猛拍下

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楼主
发表于 2007-8-6 20:19:00 | 只看该作者

TWE第170谢谢大家帮忙猛拍下

今天作为练习让自己写了篇这样的,一个月之后考试了,请大家帮忙提点意见,这个话题我从这样的方面写会不会有点问题?请指导~~

TWE170

Groups or organizations are an important part of some people’s lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.

 

Nowadays, as human communication is getting more and more easy and convenient, people got abundant chance to connect others. And since the modern society is sometimes too complex that few problems could be solved by a single person, modern people cooperates a lot more than they used to. As a result of this, groups and organizations, of numerous kinds, now all play remarkable roles in our daily life.

 

Commercial organizations certainly are a kind of most important organizations, not only huge international ones like WTO or APEC, but also small local ones like the your hometown’s grocer club, they always have great influence on every single person’s daily live. For example, since 2001, when China joined the WTO, some of Chinese industry closed down because of the increasing of import, while some other Chinese grabbed the chance, get their industry progressed, exported more and than became rich. The WTO get Chinese commerce and society changed a lot.

 

From small primary school to the colleges and laboratories in Harvard, the function of study group is working eminently everywhere. A study group gives student a good environment to discuss and to do research together. During the process of communicating and debating, students renew their thoughts and learned to place their opinion in sequence. When I was in high school, I would always debate with my partner on the topic before writing my composition; the discussion gives me a lot inspiration at that time.

 

One man’s meat is another man’s poison, different people have different interest. Consequencely, It’s rare and lucky to meet someone with the same taste and hobby. People noticed that invented club and salon. Organizations of entertainment and interest find the people got similar interest, and gather them up. In such groups, mostly you will find yourself relaxed and comfortable. The members got great similarity and it’s much easier to build up new friendship. Some people of melancholia, After attending a few times of group activities, get back to health again

 

As has been noted, groups and organizations improve our working efficiency ,widen our view and enlighten our daily live. Therefore, I can safely draw the conclusion that the importance of associations is second to none.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-10 22:48:00 | 只看该作者

难道是因为写得实在太差了连看的人都米有……

板凳
发表于 2007-8-11 12:35:00 | 只看该作者

你可以先参考该版置顶的帖子里边的修改集合

然后我在iBT区有一个写作的帖子,你也可以参考一下

然后发现自己的一些问题,进行修改过后再发上来

我进行具体的修改

地板
发表于 2007-8-14 10:48:00 | 只看该作者
原来要自己先根据论坛的东东,改好再让大家来拍的啊?
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