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求大侠指导作文：我这样水准能得多少分呢？我该如何提高啊？ 70. Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Automobile is one of the most important inventions in history. It changes people's way of life. Though car may has caused several problems, I believe it has contributed to the improvement of modern life. Cars enable people to travel a long distance more conveniently. If there is no car, people can only attend school or go to work on foot. They will not be able to live far from city. If there is no school near their home, children may not have the chance to study. If every people have to live really close to their office. The downtown will get quite crowed or the workers will have to spend a long time on the way. Cars improve not only people's working condition but also their leisure time. During weekends and holidays, car owners will be able to drive their family to a near by city and have a good time together. Though there are traffic jams sometimes, the problem can be avoided by road system reconstruction. Automobiles make new business model. A lot of goods are now transported by truck. If there is no truck, people may not be able to enjoy fresh fruit and vegetable or they have to pay very high price. Short and middle distance truck transportation is not only convenient but also cost effective.
Automobiles make new business model. A lot of goods are now transported by truck. If there is no truck, people may not be able to enjoy fresh fruit and vegetable or they have to pay very high price. Short and middle distance truck transportation is not only convenient but also cost effective.
Automobile itself is a growing industry and a remarkable part of the morden development. There are so many automobile companies around the world. Those companies offer a large number of working chances. Car making is also a kind of art. Have you ever been to any automobile show? have you ever seen any famous & classic design? Have you ever been to an F1 event? All those automobile related activities are fantastic and exciting. Some people may argue that growing use of automobiles caused serious problems such as air pollution. I agree. But compare with the benefit it brings, car is absolutely a positive factor. Now more and more people have noticed the car related problems and they are working hard to change the situation. For example, clean fuel car is invented. In conclusion, I believe there is always a way to deal with the trouble. We should take automobile as one of the things that improved our life most.
感谢指点，感谢指导下我该如何提高。 坐等大牛。
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