[求助]这句话表达有没有问题？

bomin

Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, + 主句

我知道Charcoal replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, + 主句这样没错，但要是想表达一个动态的被动呢？然后可以这样表达吗？谢谢！：）

nickynicky

好像不好，being要去掉

用replaced足够表达意思，没必要多一个being