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题目是舞蹈在文化中起到重要的作用.同意与否? 麻烦帮我仔细看看.这是我写的第一篇托福作文....帮我多指出些不足的地方和问题.. 谢谢啦!!! Recently people in ever-increasing numbers are getting to realize that numerous dancing performances are given to the public. There is a growing awareness of both the positive and negative influences that dancing brings to a culture. Some people disagree with the idea that dancing plays an important part in a culture. For they hold the belief that dancing is just a type of non-speaking act. But from my point of view, those dancing with countless passion and meaningful body languages play a significant role in a culture. Of course, dancing helps a culture to be passed down from generations effectively, as it records a lot of meanings in its own way. With the development of economy, the largest part of social attention is paid into financial realm. Result from it, we can draw a conclusion of that it is our duty to keep the culture active. As far as I am concerned, dancing is an essential fashion to maintain a culture full of energy. As we all know, dancing always contains a large number of cultural backgrounds and, to some extent, the introjections of different cultures. It sometimes likes a reminder to us by giving indications that we have the responsibility to keep our culture vigorous. For example, a dancing which is named “Mohualian” is a relevance to the Chinese traditional customs. It shows us a picture of how Chinese farmers dating with their lovers. This dancing was often performed by 12 dancers, 6 men and 6 women, with their faces covered in different colors. All the dancers in it show their powerful emotions to the audiences. This traditional dancing is passed down from one generation to another. As I am a dancer in our school club, I know that dancing needs to pay a lot of passion and emotion to it. After dancing for a long time, although you are tired, your spirits remain high. In my opinion, passion is the most significant thing which leads us to success. With passion, we have the ability to inherit our culture and to create new ones based on it. Currently, a growing number of teenagers are in favor of one style of dancing, Hip-hop, which is a kind of dancing with powerful rhythms. Boys use their hands to sustain their body while girls always show their beautiful shapes when they are devoted themselves into it. Thus we see that whatever type of the dancing is, it plays an important role in a culture as dancing inherits the old and develops the new. As a matter of fact, by compared with dancing, a number of other factors also play important parts in a culture. For instant, singing old songs helps to keep our conventional custom. Drawing pictures have an unforgettable effect on memorizing the culture. Playing music instruments also remind people a greater impression of their culture. Although we can find out many other factors that also essential to a culture. I hold the view that dancing is more obvious. There is no other thing better than dancing to pass down a culture through a non-speaking form. As well as dancing has its special power such as passion or emotion to keep the culture fresh. Undoubtedly, all the analysis leads to the unshakable consequence that dancing plays a vital role in a culture. | 
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发表于 2007-7-30 02:14:00
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