【求改】【巴朗模考第一篇】

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【题目】Leaders like John F.Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

【全文】Besides John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King, there are other world leaders who make crucial contributions to people on both ecnomic and policy. The leader I want to name may seem a little unfamiliar to most people because he is an ancient leader. His name is Qin shihuang.

Why do I refer to this leader rather than others? The primary reason is that it is him who first unitifies China. During previous centuries, the whole China is splited into several parts, which lead to continious wars and battles between different areas. People suffer from hunger and disease, as well as displacement. When Qin shihuang unifies the whole land, people start to settle down and live a more peaceful life. In the sequent years, seldom will there be any conflicts between different peoples and regions.

Not only do I want to refer to the unification of the whole country he has made, but also the policy he has made on economic. Qin shihuang claims the whole country should use the same money and coins to purchase any goods such as vegetables and clothes. This contribution is even considered much more influential than the first one because the policy makes the exchange of goods more frequently and widely than ever before, which boosts the ecnomic of the country as well. Under such circumstance, the government could control the business and ecnomic better than before.

What Qin shihuang has contributed to the country is more than that. To defense the country from strong enemies from northern area, Qin shihuang starts to build Great Wall in the northern region, which plays an important role in the defense system. The Great Wall, as the essential part of defense system, not only allows people to live peacefully, but also is a miracle building to the present people. Consequently, thanks to the contribution of Qin shihuang, in the following decades, there forms a relatively peaceful and presperious phase in China.

More than that, the life-size soldiers in Qin shihuang tomb also another contribution Qin shihuang made especially to us. Although there are some mistakes he has made during the dominance, compared with what he has done, they are really minor errors. So in conclusion, Qin shihuang should be remembered by all of us due to his great contribution to people. And what he has achieved still plays an important role on our current society.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-26 15:18:38编辑过]