[原创]帮帮小生

liyanping

本人写的作文, 还剩三天就考试了,写的不好, 请各位高手指点, 帮修正一下,小生将重新发出, 提供给大家.

 

yumihooo

Where is it?

P.S.: Next time when you want other people to give you some revision about your essay, you'd better say it clear in the TITLE, or there will be only few people who's gonna pay attention.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-18 17:09:48编辑过]