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大家我改一下作文吧 :)

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发表于 2007-6-9 18:10:00 | 只看该作者

大家我改一下作文吧 :)

第一篇,花了30分钟。但是发现chlidren全部敲成chlidren,我已经word改回来了,还改了几个拼写错误。大家帮我看看吧,6月24号考,今天才开始看作文。谢谢大家。。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Ever since a child is born, he has begun his life-long education process.  Parents are children's first teachers.  They learn many things directly from their parents.  Also, children go to school to receive education.  So people might ask the question, which is better, the education from parents or the education from school?  I think that parents are the best teachers.

 

First, parents influence children's moral value, which is the most important lesson in life.  My parents are uneducated people according to the numbers of years of education they have received officially.  But they are very good persons and they teach me a lot of valuable things.  My father always says that a person should be responsible to his own actions.  And he does behave in this way himself.  He takes good care of us three children; he says that since he brought us to this world, it is his responsibility to make us grow up in a positive environment.  I learned to take my own responsibility since very young because of my parents' influence.

 

Also, parents have the privilege to spend most of time with children.  Although children attend school to receive education, it is hard for them to gain enough attention from teachers as much as they need.  As there are always so many students, it is reasonable that teachers cannot pay special attention to each of the students.  Sometimes they only stress on good students.  But parents have full attention on their own children.  Attention is important in a child's development.  They need someone to turn to whenever they want.  Only parents can afford that kind of care.  So, in the sense of care, parents are best teachers.

 

Last, there is a time when a child will graduate from school.  But there will never be a time when the education from parents ends.  Parents are life-long teachers, who accompany a person's whole life.

 

So, parents are best teachers in my eyes.  We are educated through a lot of channels---we receive formal education from school, we are influenced by TV, we learn from friends and peers, but parents are the best teachers, it is important to know to appreciate our parents.

 

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发表于 2007-6-10 15:08:00 | 只看该作者
建议发到写作版去。。。
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