prep1-20 prep语法笔记解释有误 求助

lqn0621

20.  (25635-!-item-!-188;#058&002069)

 

 

The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom, eventually, if its pursuer is not cowed by the performance, will fall over and play dead.

 

 

(A) broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom,

(B) broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom,

(C) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

(D) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

(E) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

笔记中给出答案

A: 两个动词之间应该有连词

B: 同上

C: correct

D: broadening 和 feigns不平行；but with no 不如用句子表达好

E: broadening 和feigning之间必须有连词

我选b  b中动词有连词啊   broadens  and feigns  中的and 不是么？

觉得b  puts on 可以和   broadens  and feigns 并列 

可能是我没读懂意思 ，只从语法角度考虑 没有从逻辑考虑

 hissing and rearing back ， broadening and feigning ，这样的结构比奇怪，以前没有见过 

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-7 20:16:35编辑过]

skylighting

我觉得这个题有一个很重要的考点就是句子后面那部分 will fall over and play dead 的主语。

整个这句话的意思是：这个hognose snake 很能虚张声势，从hissing and rearing back, 到 fergning reepreated strikes，都是在描述他怎么虚张声势的，hissing and rearing back后面的这些，应该跟hiss and rearing 平行，都用ing形式，作为impressive bluff的描述。"but"后面说的是，这种蛇虽然虚张声势，但是一旦袭击它的动物没有被它的声势吓跑，那这种蛇最后就会fall over and play dead.原句里but后面带的句子不完整，所以要加个it，这样就完整了， it will fall over and play dead.

我发现在绝大多数情况下，有having都是不对的，prep里面只出过一道题用了having的。另外with 也要格外小心，经常带了with的时候就错了。

个人意见，仅供参考阿。。。

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-7 23:40:46编辑过]

crowkiller

以下是引用lqn0621在2007-6-7 20:16:00的发言：

20.  (25635-!-item-!-188;#058&002069)

 

 

 

The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom, eventually, if its pursuer is not cowed by the performance, will fall over and play dead.

 

 

 

(A) broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom,

(B) broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom,

(C) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

(D) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigns repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

(E) broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

笔记中给出答案

A: 两个动词之间应该有连词

B: 同上

C: correct

D: broadening 和 feigns不平行；but with no 不如用句子表达好

E: broadening 和feigning之间必须有连词

我选b  b中动词有连词啊   broadens  and feigns  中的and 不是么？

觉得b  puts on 可以和   broadens  and feigns 并列 

可能是我没读懂意思 ，只从语法角度考虑 没有从逻辑考虑

 hissing and rearing back ， broadening and feigning ，这样的结构比奇怪，以前没有见过 

如果是  puts on 可以和   broadens  and feigns 并列，应该用 puts on , broadens , and feigns.... and 前面要有逗号。 A , B ,and C

hissing and rearing back ， broadening and feigning / broadening and feigning  这种平行是可以的，OG 10th 第3题就是例子：

Some bat caves（, like honeybee hives,）
                have residents
                that take on
                different duties（ such as defending the entrance,
                        acting as sentinels and sounding a warning at the approach of danger, and scouting outside the cave for new food and roosting sites.）

lqn0621

killer 全方位多角度  完全领会了 

还是og 没有透啊  谢谢谢谢

qianrene

但是我觉得OG里两个并列ING中间有个,and啊

而这里broadening前面并没有，and

The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back,broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

A00A

skylighting 说的好！

ibmpcs

最简单的方法就是判断出最后的will fall over and play dead缺少主语。

afflare

请教NN,C选项众 broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and的逗号是不是应该省略？困惑中

dan2007

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springsound

以下是引用qianrene在2007-6-9 12:12:00的发言：

但是我觉得OG里两个并列ING中间有个,and啊

而这里broadening前面并没有，and

The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back,broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does and feigning repeated strikes, but it has no dangerous fangs and no venom, and

同意. 这个平行结构看起来怪怪的....

只能认为C项是相对较好的选项. 因为句子结构不完整的错误应该比不完美的平行结构更严重.