除了李笑来得范文，还有什么好的范文吗？

GenieWoo

前几天下了李的185，不过大部分都是中立的态度，不太适用，所以想请问除了他的范文，还有别的什么好的资料可以参考吗？

德克的猪

Topic:

It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is utterly a catastrophe for me to waste my precious leisure time to drive from my neighborhood to the movie theater for a blockbuster-virtually the drive time is, at most times, longer than a movie (Lord of the rings is an exception). Even more suffering, to those who have one or two “little emperor” to take care of, they will inevitably experience the affliction resulted from children’s successional noise and cry, of course. To such misfortune, another must be added-the highway to the movie theater is widely recognized as the vastest parking lot in our city. In the light of such a situation, setting up a movie theater, indubitably, is a salvation for us unfortunate people.

Saving time is a tangible merit of building a theater in our neighborhood, but not the only one. Simultaneously, it would undoubtedly bring our neighborhood with a considerable number of employment opportunities. It is good news for those who have underwent(undergone) the frustration triggered by the failure in job seeking and been worrying about their jobs in our neighborhood.

Without a theater in our neighborhood, actually, life is to some degree monotonous. We deem watching a movie as a special treat-we prepare for a long time to drive to the remote movie theater and to tolerate the tough drive time. In other tedious and friendless evenings, watching TV might be the unique form of entertainment. However, it will wholly change if a movie theater (were) to be built. Any new movies are at hands-fortunately only several minutes walk away. Via this method, the movie theater would certainly add color to our lives. In addition, those related shops, say, candy shop, soft drink shop, fast food restaurant also make life more convenient.

However, to me, as a matter of fact, the most alluring advantage of the movie theater is that it never fails to provide young people with a perfect place to date-quite(quiet) and dark, without the risk of being perceived by parents.

After four paragraphs tough writing, I believe unshakably, those reasons will suffice to support my perspective-building a movie theater in our theater is a perfect choice.

德克的猪

这篇文章是我写的

但是实话实说，如果是写preference的文章写到这个地步，也就差不多了

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-7 13:00:55编辑过]

jupandjay

胡敏的范文和《450 ESSAY》也不错，前者行文更加自然，有散文的味道，是和OG上范文风格最接近的，后者每个题目都有几篇参考文章，所以质量有参差不齐，LZ可自行鉴别哈：）

lemon2378

德克的猪很强的样子，赞

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-6-8 17:52:04编辑过]

phyllis_1985

李的范文好象结构．．．

不能苟同

GenieWoo

德克的猪~~~你的范文结构好想跟平时大家写得不一样啊。开头直接就写里有了。没有general到special。。。

考试这样写可以吗？？？

德克的猪

我给的是一个高水平的高分作文的范本，要是英语能力一般的话，不建议使用那样的superstar opening的方式

GenieWoo

为了保险，我还是用平时用的那种好了。

用平时那种也能得高分吗？还是一定要用这一类才能得高分

yumihooo

以下是引用jupandjay在2007-6-7 23:05:00的发言：
胡敏的范文和《450 ESSAY》也不错，前者行文更加自然，有散文的味道，是和OG上范文风格最接近的，后者每个题目都有几篇参考文章，所以质量有参差不齐，LZ可自行鉴别哈：）

同意！其实每个人要求不同，主要看你怎样写更合适。你可以先自己写几篇，然后再看看与那种风格最接近。改自己的风格不是那么简单的，但是完善自己的风格是大大的有希望的啊~~~

我个人推荐胡敏的范文