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德克小猪 帮我改作文吧 谢谢

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楼主
发表于 2007-6-2 16:11:00 | 只看该作者

德克小猪 帮我改作文吧 谢谢

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they don’t enjoy doing.

 

 

 

 

 

 Majority of people inclined to do things they like. They gain sense of achievement and pleasure through the progress. But Is it a wise decision? However I agree with the statement that people should sometimes do things that they don’t enjoy doing for digging out the unknown potential and reaping benefits.

 

 

 

 

 

 For my part, I believe anything meaningful worth us a try. It has nothing to do with your own tendency. The thing you used to detest may become the wonderful part of your life. Take me for instance; I’ll never forget how I turn into a huge basketball fan. I once didn’t aware that I can do sports well since I’m a suck runner. Till the day when I was involved in a basketball game accidentally. To my surprise, I won the highest scores through the whole playing. it makes me realize that I must endow some gift on the ball. Therefore, people’s amazing potential would never be discovered without participation..

 

 

 

I also believe that it is impossible to be fortunate to do the things we prefer all the time. In school, our courses cover various kinds of knowledge. You may go in for music but math is required at the same time. Learning it or not apparently don’t depend on your own preference. In workplacewe may be allocate the job we dislike to do. If so, what we should do? Complaining your boss’s ignorance or just abandoning the job forever? It is not a big deal we encounter disagreeable things; the key point is how we yield it.

 

 

 moreover, it is far beyond controversy that we derived nothing new from limited desirable activity. If we merely jog on the land we wouldn’t feel the coolness of swimming in water. If we have custom to looking for dictionary we won’t kwon the convenience searching on the internet.

 

 moreover, it is far beyond controversy that we derived nothing new from limited desirable activity. If we merely jog on the land we wouldn’t feel the coolness of swimming in water. If we have custom to looking for dictionary we won’t kwon the convenience searching on the internet.

  

All in all, I still insist that it is not a good idea doing nothing but your favorite. We are required to find out the other side of ourselves and take courage to confront with our own deficiency.

 
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沙发
发表于 2007-6-2 16:21:00 | 只看该作者
先把我的修改集合看了,你的问题不大,也不小
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-6-2 16:24:00 | 只看该作者

说的我心惊胆战的

地板
发表于 2007-6-2 16:27:00 | 只看该作者

最近我会发一个很大很大的帖子···关于写作的

·看了会有帮助

现在你先把我的修改集合中的东西看看,然后改改再发上来

今天我已经改了3篇了,实在不想再多次重复一些基本的要点和注意事项

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-6-2 16:29:00 | 只看该作者

好的好的 一定好好拜读

可您的合集我怎么找不到啊

6#
发表于 2007-6-2 16:31:00 | 只看该作者
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