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do you agree or disagree with the following statement?face-to-face
communicationis better than other types of communication,such as letter,email
or telephone calls.

    

 

    

 

    

psycologists argue that people who have no communications with other
people would probablly lead a poor live,which shows us the importance of communication.there
are various communications but among which the most fundamental one is
face-to-face ommunication.though we can keep in touch with others in the way
such as telephones,emails or letters,face-to-face communications seems more
preferable because it is easier for me to discribe something in detail;on the
other hand,people can have longer interaction by talking face-to-face.it is
also considerable that to make a face-to-face communication one cement
relationships.

    

 

    

first of all,people can detail things via face-to-face communication.the
one who talk in front others seems to have more opportunities to explain their
view clearly.the experts major in computerscience who is paraphrasing a theory when
he is teaching his students,he can use gustures or other methods to give a
whole view of the subjuct the studens are learning,while it is not easy for one
who just explain the prosess in telephone even there are no pen and paper.

    

 

    

One who have face-to-to face communication will have more interactions
with others.one can have a discussion with his partner however long he want to
talk,because there is no strict with him.he can even have a talk from morning
to evening in a small café.in contrast it costs a lot of
money to make a longtime phone call or one shall wait for a long time to recive
the letter and email.

    

 

    

Furthermore, to make such a communication ,one can cement relationships.a
research says peole will feel intimated because of the body language and the
expression on one’s face.

    

When one talkd to others the emotion expressed by his face and words
enables the listener to be interest in the talk.

    

 

    

As a result I agree with the statement of taking a face-to-face
communication which is benefitial in our daily life.

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