以下是引用风儿929在2007-5-11 22:30:00的发言: 个人感觉: compared to...这个插入将toward...与前句隔得太远,非常不顺畅.如果是: ......to contribute $330 a year toward the cost of higher education, compared to the previously $7 per year. 就可以.
我覺得這裡最主要的錯誤是previously錯誤修飾成compared。 此外,我覺得B選項沒有錯阿,...to protest a law that requires them to contribute $330 a year toward the cost of higher education, for which was previously paid $7 per year.for which正確地以非限定修飾所有的"higher education" was paid $7 per year.請指教!-- by 会员 redamat (2008/5/6 13:25:00)
for which 后面缺少从句主语啊
如果改为for which $7 was previously paid per year.才可以考虑 |