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DragonTT

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

A student must like a teacher in order to learn from the teacher.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

 

Some people think they must like the teachers in order to learn from them. Others are objective enough to avoiding the emotion factors on their teachers, and still able to learn from them. Mostly because we learn from the teachers is not because we them, is because we want the knowledge from them.

 

First of all, teachers have more knowledge than us – students. In order to become teachers, they must have a teaching license. To have a teaching license, they must pass so many tests. These tests approve them they have certain knowledge to teach certain level students. So when we are taking a class, we come to absorb the knowledge from them.

 

Secondly, teachers’ responsibility is to help us to learn better. We can learn by ourselves. However, sometimes we meet many questions which we can not solve by ourselves. At this moment, we need teachers help. Most teachers are welling to help their students no matter the students like them or not.

 

Finally, students will not learn much unless they are self-motivated. Self-motivated students will learn no matter what feeling they have on the teachers. It’s because they are desire for knowledge. They will ask the teachers questions they don’t know even though they do not like the teacher. These students will get the high marks in order to show the teachers who always avoid answering the students’ questions. So the teachers’ teaching styles will not affect these students at all.

 

Teachers are important in students’ learning because they are knowledgeable to improve students’ skill. However, learning is students’ own thing. Good students will learn from teachers no matter how poor the teachers they have, because knowledge is the only thing which they want to have, not the teachers.

lifeiteng

you did not express your personal ideas in the first paragraph.

your words are less than 300, only 291. (check by Word)

nothing to say about grammer.

but it seems you didn't understood the topic fully.

DragonTT

Thank you for your opinions.