A) In Japan, a government advisory committee called for the breakup of Nippon Telephone and Telegraph Company, the largest telephone company in the world, so it would be 我回来咯。。。大家讨论得很有深度哦。。 A has two main problems: 1)要表达因果关系时,一定要有关系的连词such as "because", "since","so that" 等。这里,A wrongly uses the word "so" to express this kind of causual relationship. In ETS's eyes, that is a no no. 2)As for the second problem, hgconnie 和 wei_wangyan 两位 NN 在上面已讲的很清楚, 因单复数的对应问题,"it would be two...."的表达是错的. You can use "it would change into two...." instead. 3)至于 "it" , it has a pretty clear referent here. The committee is the proposal maker, we know that it can not become two companies. 除非只剩下两个答案,而without other mistakes, then we can come donw to it. Otherwise, we can leave it alone. 欢迎斧正...呵呵... |