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楼主
发表于 2007-3-21 19:16:00 | 只看该作者

[原创]本人第一篇作文,跪求大家帮助!!!

 我是一名中学生,这是我第一次写这么长的作文。

不知道照这样练习下去是否可行,所以想请大家多多指教!万分感谢!

Topic4. It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

 

 

 

 

Some people agree with the point of view that “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” The general reason is that they feel the knowledge also can increase from experience. But there still have different attitude, however , I strongly believe that Knowledge gained from books is the principal choice.

 

 

 

 

There have tow advantages about the Knowledge gained from experience. First of all, some knowledge grasp from books have not practicality but the knowledge assimilate from experience have it. The reason is that the knowledge which some people acquired from experience must discover by practice by themselves.  For example, When people want to learn how to drive a car, they should be take more training than just comprehend it from a specification. Knowledge attain from experience , On the other hand , are more pertain to every different person . There have a simple example that is when people are cooking, they must according to the different people’s taste to make food but follow the cooking book.

 

 

 

 

Even though practical experience can give our some knowledge, but from books we can get more knowledge more easier . I think the time is the important thing of people’s life, people always attempt to use less time to absorb more knowledge, get it from book is more quickly than from experience . For example, book can make people realize the word, even you never have opportunity to travel around the word by yourself.   

 

 

 

 

Another advantage to gained knowledge from book is it makes people solve involved issues with efficient. There have a concrete instance of this advantage of gain knowledge from book is when you want to solve a iatrical problem, you can search from the Physic book, it can tell you the best method in the different situation, then you can make your decision quickly and exactly that thus avoid to over the remedial time. Also, the average knowledge from book is always right, because that is people’s sum up from their  experience of life, all of people must have knowledge from experience, but some of them is incorrect, such as some people think that successful is just happened on the genius, actually, Thomas Edison Genius think that Genius is one per cent inspiration and ninety-nine per cent perspiration. My friend Lang Lang is a pianist , when he was a child, he spent eight hours to practiced piano every day. finally, based his passion of his perform and hard work, he was become a famous musician in the world.

 

 

 

 

From what has been discussed above, we could reach the conclusion that as a source of gaining knowledge, books are better than experience, although, all of them have their own advantages.   

祝福大家都能取得最好的成绩!


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-21 23:08:00 | 只看该作者

大家帮帮忙!!!!谢谢谢谢!!

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-23 22:07:00 | 只看该作者

请留下宝贵意见!必重谢!

地板
发表于 2007-3-25 01:23:00 | 只看该作者

Some people agree with the point of view that “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” The general reason is that they feel the knowledge also can increase from experience. But there still have different attitude(s), however , I strongly believe that Knowledge gained from books is the principal choice.

There have tow(什么意思?) advantages about the Knowledge gained from experience. First of all, some knowledge grasp(ed) from books have not practicality but the knowledge assimilate(ed) from experience have it. The reason is that the knowledge which some people acquired(s) from experience must discover by practice by themselves.  For example, When people want to learn how to drive a car, they should be(BE多余了) take more training than just comprehend it from a specification. Knowledge attain from experience , On (不需要大写)the other hand , are more pertain to every different person . There have (have不对,应该是 is)a simple example that is when people are cooking, they must according to the different people’s taste to make food but follow the cooking book.

收到MM短信,我看了这两段,语法错误不少的

你好好检查一下

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-25 18:23:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢姐姐的意见!我一定好好修改!错得有点不好意思呀!

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