[请教]essay使用的语气

shouyang12

个人感觉语气有感情应该是好事哦

同意 be yourself 最重要

硬把自己描述成其他人100%有风险

要知道那些商学院的专家可是各种各样的申请者都领教过的

We want to hear your genuine voice throughout the two essays that you write. Truly, the most impressive essays are those that do not begin with the goal of impressing us. Begin work on these essays early, and feel free to ask your friends and family members to provide constructive feedback. When you ask for feedback, ask if the essay’s tone sounds like your voice. It should. Your family and friends know you better than anyone else. If they do not believe that your essays capture who you are, how you live, what you believe, and what you aspire to do, then surely the Committee on Admissions will be unable to recognize what is most distinctive about you.

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