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 楼主| 发表于 2007-2-14 09:48:00 | 只看该作者

TO JOJO
我超级不喜欢读185那两人的语音,不知道为啥……汗……所以想拿别的材料做听力和口语的练习。听力没特别写出来,我是打算主要听老T跟DELTA的听力。另外我准备5月上中旬考试,所以5月我没排专门的计划……准备到时候缺哪补哪……恩那我把模考留后面,做老T的题提前

TO lisa
不是基础好……而是……LONGMAN的阅读听力部分我已然浪费完了~大家又说它的主观题出得没啥价值~模考又没到做的时候……所以我只有选择做DELTA了……不过不知道DELTA跟LONGMAN的MINI TEST哪个先做比较合理就是了……

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冲上来看报名,发现只出了3月的新考场名额……呼……下去看单词了……

132#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-2-16 21:06:00 | 只看该作者
泪……今天做了第一次作文和口语的JJ练习……对自己的chiglish无言了……大家帮我改改……谢谢……

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Do you agree or disagree with the statement: being happy with your job is more important than high salary.


作文:


Noteworthy is the fact that many people think high salary is the vital reason for them to choose jobs. We can acknowledge that high salary is really important. However, I consider being happy is the really senseful purpose of our job-and even life.

Because it is very difficult to tell what income level is high. For instance, I earned 300 Yuan by my last part-time illustration drawing job. Was that 300 Yuan a high salary? To one of my roommates, it was. Because her last part-time job just bought her 50 Yuan. But to a full-time illustrator, it wasn't at all. A common full-time illustrator in my city could get almost 800 Yuan on the same job. So we'd better not weigh our job price with salary. It is nonsense. Salary is just not a comparable thing. In another word, only when we compare with other person we could judge if our salary is high. The meaning of high-level is not stabilization. At the same time, we can see that happiness is more standard. If we could have fun in our jobs, we will always feel happy with it, no matter others do anything.

I
n my opinion, the most important thing is always matchless-just like the happiness. In despite of how much we earn -of cause, at least we should have the ability to feed ourselves - we can enjoy our life in many directions. So it is very important to choose a job we interest in. Even more, when we could feel happy and free in our jobs, we could do the jobs better. So we may have more chance to get more money from our working. 

In conclusion, I regard that being happy is the most important thing. Once you begin your vocation with joy, you can get lifelong happiness. That’s a much more significant treasure than anything else besides high salary. So I agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less important to me than being happy.

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口语


题目Describe an event such as a holiday or other occasion that you enjoy celebrating. Explain why the event is significant to you.口语我录的时候我们这边一直放鞭炮,我完全是调到最小声吼着录的……而且录了好几遍才录下来一个勉强听得清的版本,但是因为录太多遍了,自己说的话都背下来了,语速比我正常的语速就快了点,这遍的时间就没用够……哎……



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133#
发表于 2007-2-17 02:09:00 | 只看该作者

给果子MM加油!

新年快乐哦

134#
发表于 2007-2-17 03:55:00 | 只看该作者

很新年的感觉,^_^,偶这边是听不到鞭炮了。。。

这样的语速差不多,不算快唉~ 

中国人chiglish也正常,偶只有在不思考,随便讲时才比较顺溜,感觉就是不要特地去一个一个单词的说,自然点就好~

135#
发表于 2007-2-22 23:33:00 | 只看该作者

帮顶一下。

发作文的话,建议先在TXT文本文件里粘贴然后在粘到帖子里,如果从word直接粘贴过来,可能会遇到“自动复制”现象。

136#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-2 15:36:00 | 只看该作者
翻了好久翻到自己的贴……呼呼~看来真的是不进则退啊……
终于把假期作业赶得差不多了~明天也要回学校报道了~
等开学了复习也要回到正规啦……恩恩~我可没放弃~
137#
发表于 2007-3-2 23:58:00 | 只看该作者

I thought you changed name.

I am soooooooo  glad to meet you again.

138#
发表于 2007-3-3 00:22:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用糖果子子在2007-2-16 21:06:00的发言:
泪……今天做了第一次作文和口语的JJ练习……对自己的chiglish无言了……大家帮我改改……谢谢……

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Do you agree or disagree with the statement: being happy with your job is more important than high salary.


作文文件压缩包是这个


作文直接阅读:

作文文件压缩包是这个


作文直接阅读:


Noteworthy is the fact that many people think high salary is the vital reason for them to choose jobs. We can acknowledge that high salary is really important. However, I consider being happy is the really senseful purpose of our job-and even life.

这个开头比较模板式,如果能带入些更加活泼生动的元素就更好了~比如说,可以说些身边的现象啊,现在的大学毕业生都很困扰,到底是钱重要些还是满足感呢?到底怎么决定呢?有些家长可能觉得钱重要些?但学生可能会觉得满足感更加重要?云云。。。

Because it is very difficult to tell what income level is high. For instance, I earned 300 Yuan by my last part-time illustration drawing job. Was that 300 Yuan a high salary? To one of my roommates, it was. Because her last part-time job just bought her 50 Yuan. But to a full-time illustrator, it wasn't at all. A common full-time illustrator in my city could get almost 800 Yuan on the same job. So we'd better not weigh our job price with salary. It is nonsense. Salary is just not a comparable thing. In another word, only when we compare with other person we could judge if our salary is high. The meaning of high-level is not stabilization. At the same time, we can see that happiness is more standard. If we could have fun in our jobs, we will always feel happy with it, no matter others do anything.

I
n my opinion, the most important thing is always matchless-just like the happiness. In despite of how much we earn -of cause, at least we should have the ability to feed ourselves - we can enjoy our life in many directions. So it is very important to choose a job we interest in. Even more, when we could feel happy and free in our jobs, we could do the jobs better. So we may have more chance to get more money from our working. 

MM的错别字极少,用词准确性比较高,这点很好~对主体部分,我提些笼统的意见吧:

1. 第一点解释得比较充分,但感觉第二个point没有铺开,说到“选择一份自己有兴趣的工作更加重要”时,没有develop你自己的观点,为什么interest这么重要咧?这里可以展开一些,也可以举些例子。其实可以用的例子很多,随便提个,某某伟大的音乐家、艺术家,就是因为有兴趣才会有动力,也是因为有满足感和happiness才有motivation,因为这些才这么成功。。。还可以说说自己身边朋友的例子啊~顺手拈来就好了,会使文章更加有立体感。

2.句式不够多样化,若可以大胆用些复杂句效果会更好些~

In conclusion, I regard that being happy is the most important thing. Once you begin your vocation with joy, you can get lifelong happiness. That’s a much more significant treasure than anything else besides high salary. So I agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less important to me than being happy.

这个结尾还行,但稍微有些生硬,能脱离那种模板的感觉会更好~
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口语压缩包是这个


口语直接听


题目Describe an event such as a holiday or other occasion that you enjoy celebrating. Explain why the event is significant to you.口语我录的时候我们这边一直放鞭炮,我完全是调到最小声吼着录的……而且录了好几遍才录下来一个勉强听得清的版本,但是因为录太多遍了,自己说的话都背下来了,语速比我正常的语速就快了点,这遍的时间就没用够……哎……


sorry,不知是不是我机子的问题,录音声音非常小,我几乎听不清MM的话。。。给不了意见~

139#
发表于 2007-3-3 10:24:00 | 只看该作者

拜读了糖果的大作,偶还没有写,不敢过多评论,只是感觉中国英语的味道还比较浓,呵呵!

口语,MM说的还很流嘛,强继续加油

兔子就是兔子,就是比乌龟快,况且这个兔子是不知疲倦的兔子,而乌龟确是喜欢偷懒的乌龟.

 

140#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-3 23:19:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢JOJO~亲~把你的评价拷下来慢慢研究=v=

LISA~我做调查报告做疯掉了~好久没来了~抱歉抱歉~现在报告过关了(最高分~嘿~)接下来还得修改~过阵毕业论文开题~真的挺忙的~哎~就能一边做专业的事一边听听听力了~别的都没精力了

大海……其实我懒了一个假期了都……

PS:下周重庆有英国教育展~我一定要去看~有UAL耶

PS2:今天去交作业报道顺便把一堆假期时寄到寝室的prospectus抱回家了~马上开始研究~嘿嘿~

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