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lisalisalisa

thanks lisa  i'm home now(NOW是多余的) 
today i receive the check for a recent illustration part-time job
maybe i will soon begin another job for a little pc puzzle game
not a hard work, just need a little time, i think
it is better for me to do some jobs during the winter vacation
i know i will do nothing but play if i have 7-24 free time
so i decide to follow my ibt schedule this way these days

Soory, I do those. If you don't like it I will stop it next time.

I am at home. Today I received the check for a recent illustration part time job. Maybe I will soon begin anther job about a little PC puzzle game, not a hard work, just need a little time. I think it is better for me to have some jobs during the winter vacation.

(i know i will do nothing but play if i have 7-24 free time
so i decide to follow my ibt schedule this way these days) When I read this sentence I fell uncomfortable, but I don't how to say it.  It likes a Chinese sentence.

 

注意格式, 大小写,和标点符号.  我想平时我们要养成败这种习惯,考试时才能少错.

能人面前卖乖子,现丑了. 不过小人能指点江山的感觉不错.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-30 5:59:24编辑过]

糖果子子

嘿嘿 谢谢lisa 抱~ 我平时写东西老不打标点 习惯了 以后写E文一定记得按正规格式来 很久很久没拿E文写过东西了 看来以后一定要经常写写才行 光看果然还是不行啊 以后尽量拿E文写东西 lisa有空的时候再帮我改啊
今天花了一天来给家里电脑重装系统，换光驱，装软件，杀毒……DIY果然是痛苦的……不过小修电脑方面我好象是越来越强了上闹钟，明天要按时起床正常复习了！

lisalisalisa

It is 0:24am. I am sleepy. See you.

糖果子子

Tonight I chatted with a Spainish girl on e-mule. Then I found my English wasn't smooth at all, especially when we chatted about our favorite actor... I need to practice more!

lisalisalisa

I don’t think this sentence that I found my English wasn't smooth at all is an English sentence, and you cannot use smooth to modify language. Have you seen that smooth modify language in some dictionaries?  So far, I haven't.

Chatting on the inter-net is a best way, I think, to improve your English.  That can force you to think something in English.

I think I have a lot of mistakes I have not found on my writing. If you see them, do not hesitate, and tell me directly.

Good night.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-1-29 3:18:24编辑过]

lxzjojo

哈，超喜欢这种互相鼓励互相支持的氛围~~

路漫漫其修远兮，有心梦定能圆，糖果加油~~

糖果子子

今天做了DELTA的READING的1·1，我总算又开始做正事了……呼……

lisalisalisa

OG 完了吗?

芃芃猪

互相鼓励的氛围很好，希望能够加入你们！

我是准备八月底考的，先想自己复习下，七月去上个新东方

有什么问题希望能够请教你们！

trafficwc

我也报个到，准备5月考，qq:417196744