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请大家给点意见啊...给我修改一下啊..不看你会后悔啊.....呵呵.

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请大家给点意见啊...给我修改一下啊..不看你会后悔啊.....呵呵.

请斑竹帮忙一下啊..这是KAPLAN摸考时写的作文...请给些意见啊...这篇作文20分钟就写完了.请大家打击一下 啊...

 

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

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不好意思啊.....我复制时弄错了....复制了两次了啊..
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