请大家给我的作文排砖

floppyking

是OG上的independent writing 的例子

第一次准备IBT,准备了大概一个月，开始准备写作部分了，看了一个OG上写作部分的评分标准，看到例子，就自己写了一个，还没看

例子的作文，其中断断续续在CD上看过一些朋友的练习，虚心请教各位帮我各方面点评一下，比如说结构，句法，或者那些词用的不合适

或者有什么更加合适的表达方式..........谢谢，

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.  

My response:  

Telling truth is recognized as a very good habit and excellence all round the world, and it’s true that honest is a very

important factor to deal with most of the relationship, but I believe in some cases, Telling the truth is not the wisest way

to handle some problems.  

Firstly, appropriate exaggerate recognition is widely accepted by most people, People always likes to be admitted by

others, especially by some strangers when their first meet each other, for instance, when you need a woman’s help,

it’s not suggested to ask for help directly but praise her nice dress or good taste of the fashion, even it’s not the truth.

This would make most ladies happy, and problems would be easier to be solved in this harmony environment, both the

woman and you will be happy, because your problem has been well resolved and the women is admitted.  

Sometimes, not telling truth doesn’t mean lie, you can choose to keep silent rather than to tell the disaster truth, let’s

take a extreme case for example, a old man unfortunately have had a deadly cancer, you as his relative or friend,

 it’s silly to talk to him that the how horrible the cancer is, and no one survived with this kind of cancer, no medicine is

effective on this cancer, I’m sure, your relationship will be broken up at once, if you really do it in that way, even we all

know all you said are truth, in this situation, it’s a better choice to comfort the patient, try to talk to him with something

happy, at least let him forget about the disease temporarily.  

Moreover we all know the “white-lies”, it’s also a prove that telling the truth is not always helpful in some relationships,

especially who child or adult who is in a frustrate emotion,just tell them some white lies, to encourage them that they

are doing quite well, praise their work, even though not so satisfied actually, take myself for instance, when I just start

my career, I was not very confident, always not willing to take any responsibility, my boss, a very nice and professional

supervisor, always encourage me, like praise my work in the team meeting which makes me more confident, and now

 I’m a very qualified engineer in my field.

As all above, I think telling truth is not the most important considerations in most relationships but not all relationships.

As all above, I think telling truth is not the most important considerations in most relationships but not all relationships.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-5 10:13:15编辑过]

floppyking

自己顶一下，为什么没有朋友愿意帮我点评一下：（