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楼主
发表于 2006-12-2 21:54:00 | 只看该作者

作文...晕了

按照传统路数...观点一...观点二...让步段...写作文好几篇了...感觉基本定型了..自己觉得高分没有...低也不会...前几日在CD看到高人的作文...叙述性的...比较流畅...感觉很好...自己也模仿一下...结果辛苦不说...居然写了50分钟....各位大侠指点迷津...还要坚持不?还是按老套稳定点...这种文章不好写...我不是牛人...很怕到时发挥不稳定写不完....惨死....小弟准备报1月

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2006-12-2 22:03:00 | 只看该作者

加问...叙述文是否有明显优势?...

板凳
发表于 2006-12-3 00:53:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用cq3429在2006-12-2 22:03:00的发言:

加问...叙述文是否有明显优势?...

目前的反馈,的确写成记叙风格的相对分数高些,问题是这种文章国内考生还不太适应。如果不熟练,还是可以按照老套路写,但要注意语言能力的提升,比如句式的多样性和用词的丰富性。
[此贴子已经被作者于2006-12-3 0:54:37编辑过]
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-12-3 10:07:00 | 只看该作者
恩..多谢版主老大...
5#
发表于 2006-12-3 19:45:00 | 只看该作者
作文到底是条理性的好,还是记叙性的好啊??
6#
发表于 2006-12-3 20:29:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用SHERRYTSING在2006-12-3 19:45:00的发言:
作文到底是条理性的好,还是记叙性的好啊??

其实都可以,后者可能现在稍微好些。如果楼主时间比较多,可以尝试练习后者。不过把前者练熟,再在语言上多下些功夫,应该也能有不错的成绩。虽然要取得独立写作满分也许后一种更有优势。
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发表于 2006-12-6 09:46:00 | 只看该作者

斑竹,你好啊.可不可以给我一点意见啊..这是我的作文.摸考KAPLAN时写的.谢谢了啊.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

when it comes to the issue of the contrast between the learning way, different people may respond diffferently  based on their education background, personality and so forth.some suggest that it is the trend to adapt ourselves to the distance learning  due to the development of techonology.while others belives that the traditional classsroom learning still plays an  vital role in the education. based on my own experience, i would strongly support the latter.And i will try to explain it in the following paragraphs.

 first, the classroom learning can develop the students' teamwork spirit which we can not get from the distance learning.the teachers may assign the students some group study on the text topic. accordingly , the students ought to cooperate with them to achie the group goal on time. they have to discuss on the separate work and receive the personal responsibility to finish the task.  through  this process, it is certain that the student will develop the spirit of cooperating with others, which will be beneficial to their future.

second, the students can study more from their classmates when they study in the same classroom. you can imagine that there are many students putting up their hands to answer the questions and then give their own ideas on the issue being discussed. due to the different backgrounds and experience , the students can give various answers to the question. and by doing so , the student can lean more from it  and can broaden their scope. i remember that when i study in the university, one of our university professor always gave us a free talk class. and the teacher only functioned to give us the hot topic and let the students to talk what they thought based on their experience.  till now, i have to appreciate that class because i really learn much from it.

third , it may be more convenient for the students who have to have an experiment class.can you imagine the students can make an experiment at homes without the necessary facilitys?absolutely not. therefore, once you study in the classroom in the school, it is more convenient and beneficial for student to have experiment class because the students can operate the experiment with the facilities in the school lab. furthermore, the teachers can give the students necessary  nstuctions to avoid the error and unnecessary danger. so it is more wise and safe for students to have a class in the classroom.

admittedly, the distance learning has its own advantages, such as the study efficiency  and flexible class scheduele made according to the students' necessity. these are the main reasons why there are so many people favor  the distance learning.

indeed, great changes have taken place due to the development of the technology and people now can enjoy the convenience which is unimaginable in the previous years. however , when it mentions the way to receive the education , i would strongly support the classroom learning based on what i have discussed above.

 

 
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发表于 2006-12-6 09:48:00 | 只看该作者
请斑竹多给点意见啊..我15号考的....
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